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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 4,592 Joined: 31-October 03 From: New Jersey Member No.: 39 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Larry Carr  |
1st Revision: 11/11 PM
LIP-SMACKING DELIGHT Tasty and refreshing as summer’s breeze, savoring quickly induces brain freeze. Thick and soothing as orange smoothie, relishing flavors makes me feel groovy. Delicious and tempting as a beguiling beauty, devouring its core smacks oh so fruity. Soft and sweet as freshly whipped cream, gorging calories goes to extreme. Zesty and exhilarating as my lover’s smile, eating ice cream never goes out of style. LIP-SMACKING DELIGHT Tasty and refreshing as a summer’s breeze, savoring it quickly induces brain freeze. Thick and soothing as an orange smoothie, relishing its flavors makes me feel groovy. Delicious and tempting as a beguiling beauty, devouring its core smacks oh so fruity. Soft and sweet as freshly whipped cream, gorging its calories goes to the extreme. Zesty and exhilarating as my lover’s smile, eating ice cream never goes out of style. ·······  ·······Give thanks for your new friends of today, but never forget the warm hugs of your yesterdays.
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Nov 11 05, 13:55
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Hi John
Oh how I wish I had a magnum ice cream in the fridge now. Will have to wait till I go shopping tomorrow. I agree with Cathy's advice to lose it and its in the first two verses. I would also do the same in this verse. Soft and sweet as freshly whipped cream, gorging {its} calories goes to {the} extreme Thanks for the read Nina |
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JLY Lip-Smacking Delight Nov 10 05, 06:45 
Cathy Hi John,
Boy does this bring back some memories f... Nov 11 05, 08:46 JLY Cathy,
This was a light-hearted endeavor and fun t... Nov 11 05, 09:01 Cathy Hi John,
This was a light-hearted endeavor and fu... Nov 11 05, 11:18 JLY Nina,
Thanks; after reading your comments, I can s... Nov 11 05, 14:00 Toumai Hi John,
A very tasty treat! Gorging calories... Nov 15 05, 14:17 
JLY Fran,
Ice cream is delightful any time of the year... Nov 15 05, 14:32 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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