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 Oct 30 05, 18:42
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I remember Black Suede - scented skin; muscles - firm, rippling. I feel the change in facial structure as you smile ... beneath my hand. Encircled by your warmth, wherein our love resides; I know your thoughts and you sense mine ... Placed upon your heart, I feel passion roiling; as lips draw near feelings grow stronger ... beneath my hand. Cathy Bollhoefer copyright Oct2005 |
  
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Nov 1 05, 12:43
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 1,621 Joined: 18-August 05 From: Johannesburg, South Africa Member No.: 127 Real Name: Beverleigh Gail Annegarn Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Jox |
A sad but, beautiful story, Cathy. You sound like a very strong person!
Lots of good wishes to you both! Hope you will be very happy. Bev :) ·······  ······· |
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Cathy Beneath My Hand Oct 30 05, 18:42 
Nina Hi Cathy
A very passionate, sensual poem from you... Oct 31 05, 00:52 Cathy Hi Nina,
A very passionate, sensual poem from you... Oct 31 05, 08:27 Nina Hi Cathy
>C>I was thinking of my fiancee - who li... Oct 31 05, 14:04 Peterpan Hello Cathy~
This is a different angle for a love... Oct 31 05, 15:56 Cathy Hi Nina,
I didn't know you were engaged, cong... Oct 31 05, 17:48 Cathy Hi PP,
This is a different angle for a love poem.... Oct 31 05, 17:52 Nina Hi Cathy
>C>Nina's imagination ran further wh... Nov 1 05, 01:17 Cathy Hi Nina,
>C>Nina's imagination ran further wh... Nov 1 05, 07:05 Cathy Hi Bev,
Thank you, I appreciate that! H... Nov 1 05, 19:20 Cleo_Serapis Hi Cathy.
This is a lovely piece and I particular... Nov 13 05, 10:15 Cathy Thank you Lori! :ballet: :rose: Nov 13 05, 11:50 ohsteve Very good descriptions and imagery here, good writ... Nov 22 05, 19:22 
Cathy Hi Steve,
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