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 Apr 7 04, 08:42
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 Babylonian  Posts: 80 Joined: 25-January 04 From: Alpharetta, Ga. Member No.: 52 Real Name: Elaine Crump Writer of: Poetry  |
Lori, your poem touches the heart. Lost my father three years ago at Christmas time. Each verse brings the bittersweet reminder of past Christmas joy mingled with loss. Loved the images you have created, the tender feelings evoked. Nicely done. :) Elaine
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Apr 13 04, 19:06
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (LadyEvergreen865 @ April 07 2004, 09:42) Lori, your poem touches the heart. Lost my father three years ago at Christmas time. Each verse brings the bittersweet reminder of past Christmas joy mingled with loss. Loved the images you have created, the tender feelings evoked. Nicely done. :) Elaine Thank you Elaine for sharing your response with me! While a 'tender' topic, I am inspired by your reaction. May your memories all hold a special place in your heart. . .  ~Lori :angel: ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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LadyEvergreen865 Wreath of Reflection - A Season of Tears Apr 7 04, 08:42 
Cleo_Serapis Wreath of Reflection - A Season of Tears
As seaso... Nov 30 03, 12:54 Charon How touching, how sad. Your heart, my dear, ... Dec 1 03, 19:48 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Atila The Hun @ Dec. 01 2003, 19:48)Ho... Dec 3 03, 18:32 Michelle Hi Cleo,
This is beautifully sad.
I think ... Dec 9 03, 12:00 Hi Lori
Your poem expresses what a lot of people f... Dec 9 03, 14:17 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Michelle @ Dec. 09 2003, 12:00)Hi Cleo... Dec 13 03, 22:02 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (AkhenhatenII @ Dec. 09 2003, 14:17)Hi ... Dec 13 03, 22:04 Athena Hi Lori,
This poem is beautiful, albeit sad. I b... Dec 25 03, 18:27 Don Hi Cleo,
Very nice through and through.
What I ... Jan 17 04, 13:51 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Athena @ Dec. 25 2003, 18:27)Hi Lori,
... Apr 5 04, 17:50 Cleo_Serapis H E L L O DON!
My my, I want to thank you very m... Apr 5 04, 17:52 
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