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 Oct 28 04, 06:41
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 764 Joined: 18-October 04 From: Sabah, Malaysia Member No.: 80 Writer of: Poetry  |
Cleo,
You are always so encouraging ! Thanks a lot for dropping by.   :king: Lai ·······  ······· |
  
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Nov 6 04, 00:35
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 764 Joined: 18-October 04 From: Sabah, Malaysia Member No.: 80 Writer of: Poetry |
Thanks a lot Don for the critiques. You are right about the last stanza. I have rewritten it. :smart:
All the best :sun: Lai ······· ······· |
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Aggiel Sing Little Bird , Sing ! Oct 28 04, 06:41 
Aggiel You are right James. The weather is certainly bett... Oct 28 04, 06:45 Don Hi friend,
I thought last stanza rhyme was a litt... Nov 4 04, 20:07 Cleo_Serapis Very nice Lai!
I will re-visit this nice song po... Oct 27 04, 05:22 Jox Hi Lai,
I like the Scottish aspect - "Wee" but I ... Oct 27 04, 05:52 
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