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Cleo_Serapis
post Aug 14 05, 14:46
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While Pandora's been busy with Clerihews, Cybele talked me into adding another IMAGE for your musing of which she photographed on holiday. Why not have a go at this one?

Your task:
Write about the image below and include in your response:

Where you are going and why.
Make it more challenging and pick a bygone era.


Photograph © Grace Galton


Good luck! There is no announced end date for this challenge.

~Cleo and Cybele  Pharoah.gif   StarWars1.gif






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post Aug 31 05, 06:25
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The responses to this beautiful picture are amazing!

Cathy, I loved your piece here, especially this last part

Out there in the harbor
stands a woman, faded grey;
torch in hand, raised up high
to promise freedom to all men.


I could just imagine the generations of tired, frightened people, gazing up at it for the first time..excellent :)

Here is one that this picture made me think of..from a few lines I scribbled on a train about two years ago.  It's a bit strange but long train journeys seem to have that effect, I think!!

Thoughts on a train

A pressurised, furious cold
in late January.
Spring circles and streaks past
in strange occasional orange light over
bulbs clinging grimly to hard ground.
Frost pulls a firm grasp.
Grey skies.
Grey faces.

Mothers fling frantic stimulation
at bored children, voices shrill
against fogged glass,
far off lights, wisps of smoke,
and stale scents of coffee.

A nun reads from The Tablet Catholic Weekly-
Life and Death Choices over Iraq.
She hasn't turned the page for over an hour
and I have read the
upside down
paragraph over and over and over and
can't make up my mind either.
At times her eyes glaze over into
a sleepy, mild obscurity.
I cannot read her.
It is one of those days.
Nothing is real and she dozes gently into my thoughts.
Our eyes meet.
I look away first.

She gives up and turns the page at Athlone station,
Approaches to Unity.
This interests her more and she adjusts her glasses.
I remain with Iraq; she has disappointed me.
It floats around my mind with
music on my cd player, an aching tune,

Miserere Nobis, dona nobis pacem

Plea for peace.

It makes the afternoon golden suddenly,
crystallises tears and ends
on a mixture of sixty six versions of the chord C.
Its echo lasts.

Nothing makes sense.

The future drifts ahead but I want to stay
here in the dry air,
hidden, too and hooded,
a fixed gaze outwards.
I want this same blinkered belief.
Colour hurts.
Skin itches and jumps, somewhere
a heart thuds and pulls out air.
Too fast.

Feet tap, she stirs now. Wary glance.
I want to sit here and refuse to move.
until someone comes to pull me
out of my head,
piece by piece.
I get up and walk, like her I have a purpose
I am trying to find.
The mist thickens.
Steam drifts with no breeze to guide it.

She straightens, stretches tired legs into my vacated space.
I wonder what conclusions she drew.
She certainly mixed up mine.






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Lucie

"What could have made her peaceful with a mind
That nobleness made simple as a fire,
With beauty like a tightened bow, a kind
That is not natural in an age like this,
Being high and solitary and most stern?
Why, what could she have done, being what she is?
Was there another Troy for her to burn?"
WB Yeats "No Second Troy"

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- Cleo_Serapis   Cross Country Train Trip (Image challenge)   Aug 14 05, 14:46
- - Cleo_Serapis   I forgot to mention that responses to this challen...   Aug 15 05, 15:58
- - Nina   Hi Lori Here is the picture that came into my min...   Aug 15 05, 16:09
- - Cleo_Serapis   Wow Nina.   This is excellent response to the pi...   Aug 15 05, 17:42
- - Nina   Hi Lori This is excellent response to the picture...   Aug 15 05, 23:33
- - Jox   Hi Nina, Your second fab poem which I've read...   Aug 16 05, 05:06
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Nina @ Aug. 16 2005, 00:33)Hi Lori Go...   Aug 16 05, 05:31
- - Nina   Hi J Your second fab poem which I've read tod...   Aug 16 05, 07:40
- - Jox   Hi Nina, Thanks for your kind comments. I don...   Aug 16 05, 07:51
- - Nina   Hi J I don't know that tv programme, no, sorr...   Aug 16 05, 07:56
- - Cybele   Hi Nina, What a great response and I remember s...   Aug 16 05, 07:59
- - Nina   Hi Grace What a great response and I remember so ...   Aug 16 05, 08:27
- - Jox   © Mike Gable, 2005. I, Mike Gable, do assert my ri...   Aug 16 05, 09:20
- - Nina   Hi J You paint a vivid picture of a child's u...   Aug 16 05, 11:57
- - Jox   Hi Nina, Yes, he's in Leicester nick. These a...   Aug 16 05, 12:17
- - Jox   Anyone else care to have a go?   Aug 17 05, 03:33
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Jox @ Aug. 16 2005, 10:20)Ref: MG 0455...   Aug 17 05, 11:31
- - Cathy   Seeking Better Life Worn shoes hurry along, nearl...   Aug 26 05, 23:20
- - Toumai   Gosh, I missed all this cos of being away. I shall...   Aug 27 05, 03:22
- - Nina   Hi Cathy Great response to the challenge.  S...   Aug 27 05, 04:05
- - Jox   Hi Cathy, I think Nina has said what I would wish...   Aug 27 05, 04:43
- - Cathy   Hi Fran, QUOTE Wow, what fantastic responses. Wel...   Aug 27 05, 08:27
- - Cathy   Hi Nina, QUOTE Great response to the challenge. ...   Aug 27 05, 08:31
- - Cathy   Hi James, QUOTE think Nina has said what I would ...   Aug 27 05, 08:35
- - Jox   Hi Cathy, Although I have no emotional feelings f...   Aug 27 05, 09:03
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Cathy @ Aug. 27 2005, 00:20)Seeking Be...   Aug 31 05, 15:55
- - Cleo_Serapis   Lucie, your poem is really very poignant. I am i...   Aug 31 05, 15:59
- - Nina   Hi Lucie A very powerful response to the photogra...   Aug 31 05, 16:23
- - ohsteve   Take the morning train from Shippea Hill, and chan...   Dec 7 05, 19:38
- - Nina   Hi Steve Well done with this response to the phot...   Feb 10 06, 02:06
- - Jox   Hi Steve - A well-written response to the challe...   Feb 10 06, 03:44
- - Cleo_Serapis   Well done Steve - I enjoyed your trip muchly! I...   Feb 10 06, 06:44
- - ohsteve   Ah but Jox I was a civilian when I got married... ...   Feb 10 06, 15:18
- - Nina   Hi Steve What a lovely story Nina   Feb 10 06, 15:24

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