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 Jul 23 05, 15:52
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
I thought this was extreamly well written for one of tender posts.
 Welcome to MM, Andrew. The black button. The finality of black. Expiration or lack of it. The test, the pass. All the academics hoping for failure. That little trace of sanity, that just brings a bit of rationalism into the exercise. A good well expressed story. John  :saruman:
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Nina Hi Andrew
and a very warm welcome to MM. If... Jul 23 05, 17:00 Andrew Hi Nina,
Wow - thanks! I'm so pleased yo... Jul 23 05, 17:09 Nina Hi Andrew
that's good :grinning:
Well... Jul 23 05, 17:20 Andrew Cheers Nina, :)
Best wishes,
Andrew. Jul 23 05, 18:02 Cleo_Serapis Hello Andrew.
WELCOME TO THE MOSAIC!
I'll be... Jul 24 05, 06:14 Toumai Hi, Andrew
Welcome to MM, hope you'll find it... Jul 26 05, 05:45 Jox Hi Andrew.
From me, too a formal big welcome to M... Jul 26 05, 06:46 Nina Hi Andrew
It is interesting how different readers... Jul 26 05, 07:16 Toumai Hi, all
I took the description of the father... Jul 26 05, 07:38 Jox Hi Andrew, Nina, Fran.
>F>I took the description ... Jul 26 05, 07:47 Andrew Hello everyone,
Wow. I've been away for a fe... Jul 27 05, 12:25 Toumai Hi, Andrew
Just to be really unhelpful, I've ... Jul 27 05, 13:46 Nina Hi Andrew
I too have only written a few short sto... Jul 27 05, 14:41 Andrew Hi again.
Fran: if by 'any luck' you mean... Jul 27 05, 16:12 Jox Hi Andrew,
Personal rejections are as gold dust -... Jul 27 05, 16:16 Cleo_Serapis Hi Andrew!
I finally had a chance to read your... Aug 13 05, 08:50 ZaoShang This story must be published by now, and I really ... Sep 20 05, 20:30 
Andrew Hi, ZaoShang,
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