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post Jun 10 05, 18:57
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Real Name: Daniah
Writer of: Poetry



In your presence

my heart revolves;
an excited twirl around your smile,
your voice,
and I bask
in the smoldering heat
that ebbs and flows
in soporific tides of completion.

Elated, I glow.
Levitating in the aftermath
of our every connection.

In your abscence

darkness falls.
Its ebony fingers laced with silence
drown me
in spiralling emptiness.
All joy dwindles,
as I lie paralyzed, cold, barren
in its wake.

Tormented, I fall,
engulfed by a painful gorge
of doubt and confusion.


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post Jun 11 05, 08:02
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Dear Dani,

A wonderful contrast of the highs and lows of love - passionately expressed as always.

Hugs,

Fran
 
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