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Apr 17 05, 14:31
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© James Oxenholme, 2005. I, James Oxenholme, do assert my right to be identified as the author of this work in accordance with Sections 77 and 78 of The Copyrights, Designs And Patents Act, 1988. (Laws of Cymru & England, as recognised by international treaties). This work was simultaneously copyrighted in the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and the United States of America. This work is posted as an unpublished work in order to elicit critical assistance and other helpful comment, only.
Ref: TC 0359 AD (Thanks, Fran, Dani, Nina and Alan )
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Malice Un-forethought by TC
Prometheus, a modern man, forged in heat and fire: a hundred-thousand volts powered his electric birth.
I shall call you St. Norme: You shall have a saintly future; a normality for all humankind.
Limbs working; voice talking, he strode across the land. A man of parts lived in him, yet he only existed in them.
Yearned to be whole: as the race from which he’d been forged.
Though people shun such different men: at best to be ignored.
Asylum denied. Dejected, he turned to his God: Why have you rejected me?
The good doctor, gone bad, could only weep: You are a race apart; different: a threat.
So St. Norme turned: he fought against all. Love, companionship denied: others’ lives, liberty he took.
From conception, he had no chance; no future. He changed his ways, his name to become what they made him.
Hope begat misery; desire begat slavery; destiny begat tyranny.
St. Norme begat the Monster.
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Malice Un-forethought by TC
Prometheus, a modern man forged in heat and fire: a hundred-thousand volts powered his electric birth.
I shall call you St. Norme: You shall have a saintly future; a normality for all humankind.
Limbs working; voice talking, he strode across the land. A man of parts, lived in him, yet he only existed in them.
Yearned to be whole; of the race from whence he’d been forged.
Though people shun such different men: at best to be ignored.
Asylum denied, dejected he turned, to his God: Why have you rejected me?
The good doctor, gone bad, could only weep: You are a race apart; different: a threat.
So St. Norme turned: against all he fought. Love, companionship denied: others’ life, liberty he took.
From inception, he had no chance; no future. He changed his ways, his name to become what they made him.
Hope begat misery; desire begat slavery; destiny begat tyranny.
St. Norme begat the Monster.
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NB: "The Modern Prometheus" is the sub-title of the gothic horror novel, "Frankenstein" by Mary Shelley - which bears little relationship in its portrayal of the Monster to most films (save Kenneth Brannagh's).
NB2: the original Prometheus was the chap who stole fire (amongst other things) from the Greek gods and gave it to mankind. They were rather hacked-off by his behaviour.
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Apr 18 05, 05:25
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Hi James. :)
This looks an interesting read - right in my favorite times!
I'll be back soon.....
Cheers! ~Cleo
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Jox Malice Un-forethought Apr 17 05, 14:31 Toumai Good morning, James
I've just been away for t... Apr 18 05, 02:21 Jox Hi Fran -
I won't answer your crit yet, lest... Apr 18 05, 02:46 Jox Thanks Lori,
>>This looks an interesting read
A... Apr 18 05, 12:48 Jox Hi Fran,
I’m back to answer your extensive and ki... Apr 19 05, 03:03 Jox Hi,
Many, many thanks to Toumai for the great cri... Apr 20 05, 08:11 Dear Jox,
Delighted to provide a crit, of sorts.
... Apr 20 05, 17:17 Jox Hi Alan,
>>Delighted to provide a crit, of sorts.... Apr 20 05, 17:46 Dear Jox,
Good. Though 'tis a shame the poem ... Apr 20 05, 18:36 Jox Hi Alan,
Thanks for your return.
>>Good. Though ... Apr 20 05, 18:54 Jox Hi despite all the conversations, this piece has o... Apr 21 05, 10:54 Siren He was made into the monster in the end... right? ... Apr 22 05, 05:04 Jox Dani,
Hi I'm dashing now and my brain is addl... Apr 22 05, 05:20 Jox Hi Dani,
Thanks for this.
>>He was made into the... Apr 22 05, 16:49 Siren James,
I came back and read this and can't fi... Apr 22 05, 19:15 Jox Hi Dani,
Thanks for returning.
>>came back and r... Apr 23 05, 03:07 Siren Hello James,
That poem is up... though I do feel ... Apr 23 05, 18:01 Jox Hi Dani,
Thank you.
I requested you to make it ... Apr 23 05, 18:56 Nina Hi James
I haven't looked at any of the other... May 2 05, 17:02 Jox Hi Nina,
>>I know this is a serious poem but the ... May 2 05, 18:41 Dear Jox,
You have asked for more crits, I'll... May 3 05, 01:28 Jox Hi Alan,
You have asked for more crits, I'll ... May 3 05, 03:17 Cybele Good morning James,
Frankenstein's monster re... May 3 05, 04:13 Jox QUOTE(Cybele @ May 03 2005, 10:13)
>>Good mor... May 3 05, 04:56 Dear Jox,
head-banging smiley - where are these t... May 3 05, 05:34 Toumai Dear Alan,
head-banging smiley (you poor thing) i... May 3 05, 05:47 Jox Hi Fran,
You missed the point - the reason that A... May 3 05, 06:16 Jox Hi Alan,
Thanks for returning - again! Much a... May 3 05, 06:20 Jox Dani - sorry forget to say, sorry...
I've ado... May 3 05, 06:22 Cleo_Serapis Congrats James on your wizard award winning tile! ... May 8 05, 11:10 Jox Hi Lori,
In modern parlance, this one went straig... May 8 05, 11:11 Toumai congratulations, James :cheer:
Fran May 8 05, 11:22 Nina Congratulations James on your wizard award for thi... May 8 05, 11:31 Cleo_Serapis This is very good James. A modern day Frankenstein... May 8 05, 11:45 Jox HI Fran, Nina and Lori,
Thank you all for your ki... May 8 05, 18:52 Aggiel Congratulations James on your wizard award .
:p... May 8 05, 23:17 Jox Hi Agatha,
Thank you very much. Appreciated.
Jam... May 9 05, 10:49 Jox Hi Lori,
Thank for popping in.
>>This is very go... May 9 05, 11:20
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