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Mar 24 05, 21:30
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Real Name: Beth
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I wish I could have known you better. I wish I could have loved you more. I wish we'd had more time together before you had to pass through Heaven's door.
And I wish you could have had more time. I wish you could have had less pain. I wish I could go back in time to have the chance to be with you again.
But Heaven's a better place right now because, Danielle, you're finally home. Still, I find it hard to carry on left here on earth - all on my own.
Sometimes I'd like to think that God is mean 'cause things turned out the way they did. But, in my heart, I know the blame's not His, though the price you paid was too high for a kid.
But Heaven's a better place right now, because, Danielle, you're finally home. Still, I find it hard to carry on, left here on earth - all on my own.
And I wish I could have made you better. I wish you'd never gotten sick at all. I wish you hadn't missed out on your life - to have to die so young's not logical.
But Heaven's a better place right now, because, Danielle, you're finally home. Still, I find it hard to carry on, left here on earth - all on my own.
Tomorrow will come, so will the rain - filled with sorrow, filled with pain. But some other day, the sun will shine. Then, all I'll remember is that you were mine.
But Heaven's a better place right now, because, Danielle, you're finally home. Still, I find it hard to carry on, left here on earth - all on my own.
http://www2.caringbridge.org/ca/danielleruef/
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Mar 27 05, 18:14
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Real Name: Lori Kanter
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May Daniel's light always shine over you Beth.
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Nefertiti Wishes for Danielle Mar 24 05, 21:30 Nina Hi Nefertiti
This is such a sad painful poem to r... Mar 25 05, 02:53 Jox Beth...
It seems so long since I've seen you ... Mar 25 05, 04:31 Nefertiti Hi Nina and James!
Thank you so very much for... Mar 25 05, 09:00 Aphrodite Hello Beth~
This is such a heart rendering tribut... Mar 26 05, 15:11 Cleo_Serapis Hello Nefertiti!
Nefertiti resurrrected again!... Mar 26 05, 17:00 Nefertiti Hi Lindi!
Thank you for your sympathies. I t... Mar 27 05, 17:29 Nefertiti Thank you, Cleo!
I know Danielle is fa... Mar 27 05, 17:31 Nefertiti Thank you, Lori!
That's the great thing a... Mar 28 05, 10:31 Zeus˛ Hi Beth,
a sad but heartwarming piece for Danielle... Mar 29 05, 11:29 Nefertiti Hi You Almighty stud, you!
Well, seems the on... Mar 29 05, 13:34
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