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Shrouded Echoes,

A midnight luminescence veils the sea,
it twinkles, bobbing in reflective rays.
Celestial constellations in ballet
as diamonds pas de duex in blackened tea.

The moonlight skims across the crested waves...
a phosphorescent glow of rippling foam,
beneath the creatures effortlessly roam
uncounted depths of salty water graves.

Now through a liquid skyline sunrays peek,
the sea’s so calm, with not a wave in sight.
As wispy clouds disperse in wingless flight
the day is new with glory that will speak.

Aside a piece of driftwood floats on by,
a gull was perched there, hesitant to fly.




 
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post Mar 26 05, 15:17
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Hello Larry~

This is an absolutely sparkling piece bringing me into a wonderful and ethereal state of mind! sun.gif  sun.gif

The moonlight skims across the crested waves...
a phosphorescent glow of rippling foam,
beneath the creatures effortlessly roam
uncounted depths of salty water graves


Superb write! lovie.gif  lovie.gif

Blessings~
Lindi






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