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Cleo_Serapis
post Sep 14 03, 15:19
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The Dance of Death

Their pitch was harsh, the sound was weak,
a nest was hidden high.
The woods were full of creature-speak
ignored by passersby.

A few were round, and some were slight,
concealed among the trees,
by parents pausing in their flight,
upon Spring’s warming breeze.

A sparrow brave, petite and frail
once perched with weary claw -
was swept away by Nature’s gale
and snatched by prowler’s paw.

The kill so swift, his silenced call
a sacrifice for hatch;
and broken wing, to mark his fall,
lay tattered in the thatch.

The clutch remained in warm domain,
their flock reduced by one,
to face the harshness and the strain
of lives they’ve just begun.

The seeds were sown, to take first flight
on wings of bated breath,
albeit soon, with all their might
descend the dance of death.

© 2003 Lorraine M Kanter


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post Mar 24 05, 21:42
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Hello, Miss Cleo.

Yes, it's Nef resurrected yet again (at least for the time being.)  

Well, I may sound like a broken record, but how poignant this is.  SUch a touching tale in the (as my 6 year odl would say) "the circle of life."  How beautiful and cruel is nature, is this world.  You capture that well.

Big Traitorous Mini Peanutbuttercup Hugs,
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- Cleo_Serapis   The Dance of Death   Sep 14 03, 15:19
- - Aphrodite   QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Sep. 14 2003, 15:19)The...   Sep 14 03, 15:43
- - Eisa   Hi Lori I love nature poems and this one is no ex...   Sep 24 03, 19:10
- - Jox   Now why didn't Charles Darwin express himself ...   Sep 28 03, 07:29
- - Don   Your "The Dance of Death" is excellent, Cleo_Serap...   Oct 5 03, 07:29
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Eisa @ Sep. 24 2003, 20:10)Hi Lori I ...   Oct 6 03, 13:28
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Jox @ Sep. 28 2003, 08:29)Now why didn...   Oct 6 03, 13:30
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Don @ Oct. 05 2003, 08:29)Your "The Da...   Oct 6 03, 13:33
- -   Hi Lori Nature red eh?  There isn't anything t...   Oct 15 03, 09:47
- - Cybele   Hello Cleo A very strong, dramatic, beautifully ...   Oct 17 03, 10:34
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (AkhenhatenII @ Oct. 15 2003, 10:47)Hi ...   Oct 19 03, 10:18
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Cybele @ Oct. 17 2003, 11:34)Hello Cle...   Oct 19 03, 10:20
- - Aggiel   Lori, I follow you right behind on this nature tr...   Oct 23 04, 04:12
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Aggiel @ Oct. 23 2004, 05:12)Lori, I ...   Oct 27 04, 05:21
- - jgdittier   Dear Lori, For me, the essence of poetry is meter....   Nov 8 04, 17:23
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (jgdittier @ Nov. 08 2004, 17:23)Dear L...   Nov 11 04, 06:31
- - Cleo_Serapis   Oh boy oh boy oh boy! NEF IS RESURRECTED AGAIN> W...   Apr 4 05, 18:04
- - Siren   Hey Lori, This reminded of a poem I wrote when I ...   Jun 10 05, 20:21

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