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jgdittier
post Mar 15 05, 13:35
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First a letter, then a word
and now a sentence thought...
Has in fact a start occurred
from which some verse be wrought?

Once a stanza now be writ
let's locate das and dums.
Slash and dash a form, be it.
When filled it sings, it strums.

Rhyme?, it must, if j g d's.
A scheme be now assigned.
Vow, must I, I'll them appease
or I shall be maligned.

Yore's the time I must promote,
our taste today will fade.
Milton, make this boat to float
Don't rain on my parade.

Windmills may be ready ploys
for questers just like me.
Poems come from men, not boys.
You may, or not, agree.




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jgdittier
post Mar 15 05, 16:49
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Dear Don,
Responses so soon are starting to scare me. Perhaps for those yet to read my ditty I should explain.
I really do follow that protocol. In anything I write not borrowed from 3 or 4 years ago, you can be sure my scanscion has gotten more of my attention than anything else.
Most nowdays go for message first, but I make a form, fill it with words and might just be as surprized as the reader.
Not sure what you mean by gender problems unless I need additional lines for ladies not maids?
Make is there as I'm imploring Milton to stand by me as he's a bard of yore.

Dear Don,
You know me (my style) better than anyone else here!

Dear All,
This recipe is not assumed to result in a gourmet meal for most. I'd be more popular if this were 1932, when I was born. I just didn't change with the times.

Cheers to all,     jgd


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- jgdittier   A Recipe for Verse By Me***   Mar 15 05, 13:35
- - Don   Hi Ron, Upon first read, I like rhythm and subjec...   Mar 15 05, 14:28
- - JustDaniel   Dear Ron... Those missing upbeats seem to cause m...   Mar 15 05, 15:46
- - Don   Well, Ron, I think you protest too much about bein...   Mar 15 05, 18:02
- - Don   First a letter, then a word Trochee trochee troche...   Mar 15 05, 18:15
- - JustDaniel   Ron and Don, please know that neither of you are ...   Mar 16 05, 03:17
- - jgdittier   Dear Don, Thank-you,thank-you! You are the fir...   Mar 16 05, 07:44
- - jgdittier   Dear Daniel, Four years ago I knew what a iamb was...   Mar 16 05, 08:03
- - JustDaniel   Iamb not averse to verse! The wittier Iamb, tr...   Mar 16 05, 08:20
- - Don   Responding to Ron and Daniel, This conversation i...   Mar 16 05, 09:54
- - Nina   Hi Ron You and I approach poetry writing from opp...   Mar 17 05, 09:51
- - Jox   Hi Ron, This isn't about me but please indulg...   Mar 17 05, 10:09
- - jgdittier   Dear Daniel, I hate to disagree, but you, my frien...   Mar 17 05, 12:47
- - jgdittier   Dear Don, Yesterday I wrote a long response to you...   Mar 17 05, 13:07
- - jgdittier   Dear Nina, Poetry is such a big field that one mig...   Mar 17 05, 13:11
- - jgdittier   Dear James, I believe you are likely to be even mo...   Mar 17 05, 13:41
- - Don   QUOTE(jgdittier @ Mar. 17 2005, 13:07)Dear Do...   Mar 17 05, 14:25
- - Don   Hi James~~ I've indulged your minute, and fou...   Mar 17 05, 14:32
- - Jox   Hi Ron... Thank you for your very understanding a...   Mar 17 05, 14:46
- - Jox   Hi Ron, excuse me for a moment. Hi Don... >>I...   Mar 17 05, 14:49
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Ron.  :sun: I missed the piece when you ...   Jun 25 05, 06:16
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Ron on your Member Choice award winning t...   Aug 8 05, 05:22
- - Jox   Hi Ron, Well done for you and your excellent self...   Aug 8 05, 05:27
- - Cathy   Hi Ron, Congratulations on a well-deserved award...   Aug 8 05, 07:51
- - Nina   Hi Ron Congratulations on winning this award. ...   Aug 8 05, 11:21
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Ron on your wizard award winning tile! ...   Aug 21 05, 11:15
- - Nina   Hi Ron Congratulations on your Wizard Award for t...   Aug 21 05, 11:29
- - Jox   Hi Ron, Congrats on your Wizard Award and members...   Aug 21 05, 12:25
- - Cathy   Congratulations on a well deserved set of awards...   Aug 21 05, 17:36
- - Don   Congratulations Ron on your well deserved and earn...   Aug 23 05, 09:38
- - Toumai   Excellent awards, Ron  :pharoah2 Fran   Aug 23 05, 11:09

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