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Jan 15 05, 13:08
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James
You are most welcome
Nina
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Jan 13 05, 10:42
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Real Name: Ron Jones
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Dear Jox, From my point of view, in depth discussions of a piece of poetry is the greatest reward I'd want for mine. Thus I hope you discount my comment about the typing finger. I suppose the area where we underlap our views is re "deep conviction" in poetry. Since when reading poetry we can't see expressions, nor eyes, hear vocal inflections, etc., and poetry often says so much in so few words, all seem to me to establish a situation where interpretation is difficult. It would therefore seem that as soon as this fact was recognized, some means to deal with it would be adopted. I assume the early poets found that they preferred the potential for misinterpretation and it has become as aspect of poetry. I find a parallelism even now, tho of the slightest importance. In writing verse, if I shorten a word in order to maintain the cadence, I show the apostrophe. I am strict about cadence and do not want my reader to stumble over whether a normally three-syllable word be pronounced with just two. It seems to me to be a favor for the reader. But no, I was quickly told that modern style requires the word to be fully spelled out, inferring that it's up to the reader to pronounce it as I intended. I've similarly never seen why.
As to how to assure that the thrust of the piece is properly interpreted, I'd totally leave that to the descretion of the writer. It's just that when I've written what I call "think pieces", they've usually been unintentionally confusing which was not my goal.
Cheers, jgd
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Nina The Pheasant Jan 15 05, 13:08 Nina Hi James
My post obviously didn't come across... Jan 15 05, 12:26 Jox Hi Nina,
Thanks again for popping back and sticki... Jan 15 05, 12:50 Jox You're very kind, Nina, Thank you very much. Jan 15 05, 13:44 Jox © James Oxenholme, 2005. I, James Oxenholme, do as... Jan 9 05, 18:44 JLY James, this seems like some kind of reversal of fo... Jan 10 05, 06:55 Toumai Hi, James,
I can usually throw myself off the ed... Jan 10 05, 06:58 Jox Hi John and Fran,
Thank you both for commenting. ... Jan 10 05, 07:24 Toumai Hi James,
I was definitely missing the intention.... Jan 10 05, 07:43 Jox Hi Fran, thanks for your reply and sorry to make y... Jan 10 05, 07:50 Cathy Hi James!
I think you have a very valid compl... Jan 10 05, 09:21 Jox Cathy, Hi... thank you very much - very helpful.
... Jan 10 05, 09:35 Cathy Others may not see it that way James. Maybe ... Jan 10 05, 12:10 Jox Cathy, I've already lost my "MM Minimalist" cr... Jan 10 05, 12:27 jgdittier Dear James,
I'm still new here at least in my ... Jan 12 05, 15:03 Jox Hi Ron,
Thank you very much for your interest an... Jan 12 05, 16:31 Nina Hi James
I read your poem a couple of days ago, w... Jan 12 05, 16:39 Jox Nina,
Hello and thank you. Thanks also for taking... Jan 12 05, 17:18 jgdittier Dear James,
For an example of a "think piece" fail... Jan 13 05, 11:08 Nina Hi James
On the other hand, how do the repressed ... Jan 13 05, 18:33 Jox Hi Nina, thanks for re-visiting.
To be trivial fo... Jan 15 05, 05:54 JohnK James,
This piece did make me chuckle. I... Jan 18 05, 10:25 Jox John good to meet you - I'll say Hello properl... Jan 18 05, 13:03 JohnK Hello James, and apologies for the delay in replyi... Jan 20 05, 17:23 Jox Hi John.
I think we've come to various agreem... Jan 20 05, 17:37 Cleo_Serapis CONGRATS Jox on your Wizard Award winning tile!
... Jan 23 05, 09:41 Nina Hi James
congratulations on your wizard award. ... Jan 23 05, 09:53 Jox Lori & Nina,
Thank you both very much indeed.
Ni... Jan 23 05, 13:23 Toumai Hi James,
A wonderfully thought-provoking piece; ... Jan 23 05, 14:40 Jox Fran,
Thank you very much - you comments mean muc... Jan 23 05, 15:21 Psyche Hi James !
I love the idea of your poem, but ... Jan 31 05, 10:47 Jox Hi Sylvia,
Thank you very much for your visit and... Jan 31 05, 12:21 Psyche Hi James !
That was a long doorbell ring. Glad... Jan 31 05, 18:01 Jox Hi Sylvia...
That was a long doorbell ring.
More... Jan 31 05, 18:45 Psyche Me again !
No, you've depressed me even mo... Jan 31 05, 19:41 Jox Hi Sylvia,
Sorry to have depressed you more - not... Jan 31 05, 20:20 Toumai Hi James,
Sylvia, I don't think you're of... Jan 31 05, 23:44 Jox Hi Fran, Thanks for popping back.
Neither of you ... Feb 1 05, 06:00 Nina Hi James
I have been trying to catch up on this f... Feb 1 05, 16:28 Jox Hi Nina,
Good to see you back; thank you.
>>I ha... Feb 1 05, 21:07
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