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 Aug 23 03, 19:09
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Hi Aphro:
Great poem. I really loved the great words you chose for this piece. Great Job. Blessings always, Your baby sister, Shava 
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Aug 15 03, 08:10
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Wow Aphrodite! :sun: :lovie: :dance:
This is truly a piece for our Garden here.  I find myself drawn into her lonely world with so few words. Your selection of words and images really captures her plea. Nicely done and congrats for being the first post in this forum!  You've added a tile to our Mosaic in style! Cheers! :pharoah2 Miss Cleo :pharoah: ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Empty Heart Aug 23 03, 19:09 
Aphrodite In utter cacophony,
her mind struggles between
rue... Aug 15 03, 08:04 Aphrodite QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Aug. 15 2003, 08:10)Wow... Aug 15 03, 08:14 Zeus˛ Lindi,
after reading this wonderful piece, a thou... Aug 15 03, 09:40 Aphrodite QUOTE (Zeus˛ @ Aug. 15 2003, 09:40)Lindi,
af... Aug 15 03, 20:16 Eisa Hi Aphrodite
How I loved reading this poignant po... Aug 16 03, 17:08 Aphrodite QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug. 16 2003, 17:08)Hi Aphrodit... Aug 16 03, 18:31 Aphrodite QUOTE (Shava @ Aug. 23 2003, 19:09)Hi Aphro:
... Aug 25 03, 18:44 Brahms Fully enjoyed reading, more so after reading the g... Aug 27 03, 21:25 Aphrodite QUOTE (Brahms @ Aug. 27 2003, 21:25)Fully enj... Aug 28 03, 18:53 Cathy ~sigh~
I wish I could write like that!
... Nov 11 04, 08:46 Aphrodite QUOTE (larrysgirl5548 @ Nov. 11 2004, 08:46)~... Jan 22 05, 14:10 Jox Hi, Lindi - I've not seen this poem before... ... Jan 22 05, 14:17 
Aphrodite QUOTE (Jox @ Jan. 22 2005, 14:17)Hi, Lindi - ... Jan 23 05, 15:35 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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