Dear Cybele, If this was your first-born, you have certainly raised a large family of impressive off-spring! The pathos of the message, the flow of the words, the rhymes, the appearance, a piece to be proud of. I believe too, that as this was your first, it suggests you've been blessed with the heart of a poet, more important than the techniques of a verse-writer. Cheers, jgd
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