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Alluring globs of decadent
dressings undress my sensation’s control. Succulent turkey smells waft delicately airing enticing aroma, tempting an abundance of delicacies eager for devouring. Filling pie, cheery fruitful flavors of contentment satisfy, while digested gladdened tidings reveal another year of thankful blessings. ©Linda Balboni 2002 ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Nov 24 04, 18:31
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry |
QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ Nov. 21 2004, 10:47)  Oh boy! It's gotten HOT in here!  Love it Lindi! May I offer an alternate ending? How about: thankful dressings instead of thankful blessings? Just an idea.... to waft over....  Great job Lindi! ~Cleo  Hello Lori~  Thank you very much for your kind response and thoughts!(cute ending) :) I wish you a very happy holiday season! Love,  Lindi ······· ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Aphrodite Thankful Blessings Nov 21 04, 09:28 
JLY Linda,
You have whet my appetite and it is not yet... Nov 21 04, 10:47 Cleo_Serapis Oh boy! It's gotten HOT in here! :grin... Nov 21 04, 10:47 Morgan le Fay Hi Lindi!
Boy, have you got me salivating for... Nov 22 04, 12:59 Aphrodite QUOTE(JLY @ Nov. 21 2004, 10:47)Linda,
You ha... Nov 22 04, 19:32 AMETHYST Hey Lindi,
Ah ah... I quite enjoyed this... and ... Nov 23 04, 04:55 Aphrodite QUOTE(Morgan le Fay @ Nov. 22 2004, 12:59)Hi ... Nov 24 04, 18:34 Aphrodite QUOTE(AMETHYST @ Nov. 23 2004, 04:55)Hey Lind... Nov 24 04, 18:36 Arnfinn Hi Lindi
Hey, the first stanza: alluring, decad... Nov 25 04, 05:18 Ephiny Hello Lindi
Unfortunately we don't really h... Nov 26 04, 07:09 Cathy Now I'm hungry all over again! :jest... Nov 26 04, 16:28 Aphrodite QUOTE(Arnfinn @ Nov. 25 2004, 05:18)Hi Lindi ... Nov 27 04, 08:23 Aphrodite QUOTE(Ephiny @ Nov. 26 2004, 07:09)Hello Lind... Nov 27 04, 08:25 
Aphrodite QUOTE(larrysgirl5548 @ Nov. 26 2004, 16:28)No... Nov 27 04, 08:42 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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