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post Oct 18 04, 11:31
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Ok, not quite critical but take a look, anyway..

I've noticed that Lori's popped into a couple of threads to remind us that those particular ones are for critting and the submissions were going considerably off track.

She is right.

I am as guilty as anyone so I think I may be able to suggest what was happening. On one thread a collaborative poem was set up and thus people kept adding. On another we did discuss the work but it rather changed into a few people chatting about Shakespeare's Greatest Hits.

So, in neither case, was anyone being in the least awkward or unhelpful; we simply wandered off the path.

I actually had to ask Alan to pop into Socrates to see one of my works (thanks, again, Alan) because too few people are there. I think, perhaps, we need to get about and do some serious critting - it will benefit us all. Sure, banter is fine and there are forums for that. Moreover, the crit forums will never stick rigidly to critting. However, there is much critting to be done and we do let people down if we don't all "get stuck in". After all, that is why most of us came to MM in the first place - to learn and improve.

Here endeth this evening's lesson. You may now boogie to Shakespeare's Greatest Hits with Bacon on Sax and Chris Marlow on glockenspiel. (Watch out for Webster with too many symbols!)

Signed, One of The Guilty Ones!
 
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Morgan le Fay
post Nov 21 04, 21:45
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{{Hugs!}}, why thank you James!  You've made me feel quite welcome already.  My main concern was critiquing without offering any works of my own.  Just haven't been able to write of late.  It's wonderful to have you be the first to welcome me back! {{hugs again}}

I've kept in touch with Zeus, via e-mail and of course Lori sends me notices about what's going on here at the mosaic.  Really don't have any excuses as to why I've been absent other than, life happens... :)

I did notice awhile back that you were 'MIA' for a bit.  Wondered what had happened to you, but certainly understand and am ecstatic that you are here now!  ( gosh it's good to see old friends!)

Yes, I'll get busy and offer a few crits and see what happens.  Thanks for the welcome back.   Love ya!!!

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- Jox   More Critting Needed   Oct 18 04, 11:31
- - Cleo_Serapis   Thanks James! Well put - with all these new admin...   Oct 18 04, 13:35
- - Psyche   Hi Cleo ! Just been browsing around and though...   Nov 19 04, 18:19
- - Jox   Hi Psyche, David (Tao) is jet-setting due to fami...   Nov 20 04, 02:36
- - Jox   The least-posts route is good - and I agree, to a ...   Nov 20 04, 02:42
- - Cybele   Hi Lori, James and Sylvia, Good point Sylvia. Bei...   Nov 20 04, 06:54
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Psyche @ Nov. 19 2004, 18:19)Hi Cleo !...   Nov 20 04, 08:31
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Jox @ Nov. 20 2004, 02:36) Hi Psyche, ...   Nov 20 04, 08:33
- - Don   Sorry folks, I am remiss for not visiting often en...   Nov 20 04, 17:01
- - Psyche   Hi Grace ! I seem to have created some movemen...   Nov 20 04, 18:34
- - Psyche   Hi James ! My mother used to say that Sagittar...   Nov 20 04, 18:57
- - Jox   Hi Sylvia, You seem to think that you might have ...   Nov 20 04, 19:17
- - Psyche   Hi Cleo !! (and all others worried about t...   Nov 20 04, 19:17
- - Psyche   Hi Don ! I also tend to click on those with t...   Nov 20 04, 19:29
- - Jox   Hi Sylvia, This tracking problem is... (I am put...   Nov 20 04, 19:36
- - Don   Hi Psyche, Always nice to talk to and hear from i...   Nov 20 04, 20:18
- - Cleo_Serapis   QUOTE (Cybele @ Nov. 20 2004, 06:54) Hi Lori,...   Nov 21 04, 07:29
- - Morgan le Fay   Hi folks, Remember me from way back when?     I ...   Nov 21 04, 21:04
- - Jox   Hi Chris, I'm up at a silly hour here so let ...   Nov 21 04, 21:19
- - AMETHYST   Ok... I'm off to do some crits ... I know... I kno...   Nov 23 04, 04:31
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hello Chris and Liz!  :wave:  :wave: W...   Nov 23 04, 06:34
- - Psyche   QUOTE (Jox @ Nov. 20 2004, 19:17)Hi Sylvia, ...   Nov 23 04, 17:36
- - Psyche   QUOTE (Jox @ Nov. 20 2004, 19:36)Hi Sylvia, ...   Nov 23 04, 17:57
- - Siren   Hi All, Seeing this post I can't help but fee...   Nov 25 04, 20:15
- - Jox   Oh, a gender debate - did I start that? Ouch! ...   Nov 25 04, 20:59
- - Siren   Ah James, I'm beginning to like you more by t...   Nov 26 04, 17:17
- - Don   Hey Jox, Somewhere above in this thread you said:...   Jan 27 05, 12:37
- - Jox   Hi Don, Thanks for your reply. I'm just a "s...   Jan 27 05, 19:32
- - Cleo_Serapis    :knight: I'll just make one comment: :cost...   Jan 27 05, 19:53
- - Jox   Hi Lori, I think that says it all! :) James.   Jan 27 05, 19:58
- - Siren   It's so refreshing to see the lighthearted ban...   Jan 27 05, 20:48
- - Jox   Dani - all of the very best; take care and see you...   Jan 27 05, 21:03

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