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 Feb 24 04, 23:36
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Why, Night?
Why, night, must you entrap me with your sickening hug of coldness as I cry? Why, night, do you hold me in your ghastly grip of loneliness? Your touch has failed me, holding no comfort. Release me, for I want you no more. I would rather grasp his frigid hand and wipe away my own tears. |
  
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Jul 27 04, 10:22
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 3,660 Joined: 23-August 03 From: Somerset, England Member No.: 22 Real Name: Grace Writer of: Poetry & Prose |
Hello Amy, :sun:
Such a powerful poem, portaying incredibly strong emotions of disillusionment and yes, anger. No nits here. You say this came easily, a good sign that it needs little or no adjustment. I found this very emotive. Well done Amy a very good read :read: Love Grace 
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blondie Why, Night? Feb 24 04, 23:36 
codger Yes indeed--night can be foe as well as friend.
Ni... Feb 25 04, 10:40 blondie Dear Gerry,
Thanks so much for reading!
I ap... Feb 26 04, 12:13 JLY At first glance, your title intrigued me , so when... Feb 26 04, 13:08 Zeus˛ Amy,
great how you expressed being caught between ... Feb 26 04, 16:57 blondie Hi Larry. :)
Thanks so much for your gracious com... Feb 29 04, 18:07 Siren Amy,
WOW! This is impressive... I adore it..... Mar 1 04, 03:54 Athena Ohhhhh Amy! After too many deaths in my ... Mar 1 04, 05:21 blondie Hi Daniah!
So glad you enjoyed this one. ... Mar 1 04, 12:03 blondie Dear Dolly,
HI there! Thanks so much fo... Mar 1 04, 12:07 recherche hello blondie finally had time to read some poems... Jul 25 04, 15:18 JustDaniel Hey Amy!
Your lines are powerful, as evidence... Jul 26 04, 05:05 blondie Kevin and Daniel,
Thanks, Kevin, for "bumping" th... Jul 26 04, 15:03 face great write, very expressive and powerful Jul 27 04, 14:47 Tao Amy,
Dear, dear, still suffering, you sweet...tha... Jul 29 04, 20:10 blondie Grace, Face, and Tao....
Thanks, friends, for sto... Jul 30 04, 13:52 
Arnfinn Hi,
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