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 Nov 12 20, 06:56
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 Trojan  Posts: 859 Joined: 27-October 10 From: Havelock Ontario Canada Member No.: 1,150 Real Name: Denis Barter Writer of: Poetry  |
Knowing Psyche has computer woes from time to time, and as I could find no connection between the ongoing original Mini Story and Psyche's words, yet thinking them ideal for making a new story line, decided to start this topic. After posting I checked that all was well, and left the site. Checking back later, it along with all my negotiating unknown waters to set it up, it hadf seemingly vanished into thin air some time later. But notwithstanding all the angst etc. I felt, decided nothing ventured, nothing gained, would suffice, so here it is again! Now I a Am waiting to see what happens this time. Please feel free to comment. Rhymer. The following is Psyche's original list of words and her Chapter - copied and pasted, followed by my own Chapter hoping someone will continue with this secondary Mini Story. Ciao for now. Rhymer. Birgitta, Prime Minister of Denmark jealousy Queen Mary chapstick rhino enchanting Run a mile Desert Altiplano Atacama Juan Diego Florez tramp Birgitta ,Prime Minister of Denmark (probably only the second woman to obtain that position,) is travelling on the Crown Suite of the Queen Mary when her lips became sorely chapped, so the Steward rushed off to get her some chapstick for the Royal lips, a product of the best quality. He happenned to be a very jealous person, so Birgitta invited Juan Diego Florez to sing for all the crew and all high and low "classes" of passengers. One of the sailors found a stowaway down among the machinery. He was actually very dirty and drunk, as is usual with the lost tramps. The Steward used to run a mile many times before he new onboard career on the Queen Mary. Many years ago I was roaming around the Atacama Altiplano when I saw a tiger. I thought they were only native to Africa, India and so on. Could it have been a vision? I decided that I was not going to a high profile psyciatrist and have my brain washed. Not for me, so I said nothing to any of my friends and just moved to another town. jealousy rhino enchanting chapstick Juan Diego Florez Arabian stallions whales Rumi diploma measles Whilst recovering from a bad bout of Measles, I had cause to use a Chapstick of salve to help heal my oft scratched sores. Measles being a disease that can prove fatal, I had for a time entered the realms of delerium and fantasy, where I had been roaming the Juan Diego Florez region. Here my delerium had me witness the antics of a Rhino who, consumed by Jealousy, chased Arabian Stallions along the shores of the Atlantic. A place where a pod of Killer Whales, in an unusual Enchanting manner were listening to the rhythmic poetry of Rumi, as he extolled the virtues of Me being awarded a Diploma for my extremely virtuoso talents. It was at that moment I returned to reality However, for a moment, I had basked in the glory Measles had awarded me. But wondered I? Would Mumps be so kind, were I to contract them? Doubtful. Rhymer. enchanting chapstick Juan Diego Florez Arabian stallions whales Staccato Rock Ling Futuristic Fathoms |
  
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Nov 28 20, 05:20
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 18,771 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
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sphincter Black Forest requiem umbilical menopause merry-go-round shanty mocha latte tsunami Right now I'm so depressed, I'm feeling as neglected as a GOPHER's SPHINCTER in the BLACK FOREST and I'm almost expecting any moment to begin hearing the musical tones of a REQUIEM being performed in memory of me. I'm wishing I could just start my life over from the moment that they severed my UMBILICAL cord. I want off of this slow-moving, lifeless MENOPAUSE-like MERRY-GO-ROUND that I'm on inside this little SHANTY at the back end of my home where the only enjoyment I've experienced of late is sipping on a MOCHA LATTE. I feel like I need some kind of sensual experience to come over me like a TSUNAMI requiem shanty tsunami gopher Black Forest melodrama demolition librarian inside-out scavenger ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Dec 16 20, 10:07
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 9,029 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Nov 28 20, 07:20 )  gopher sphincter Black Forest requiem umbilical menopause merry-go-round shanty mocha latte tsunami Right now I'm so depressed, I'm feeling as neglected as a GOPHER's SPHINCTER in the BLACK FOREST and I'm almost expecting any moment to begin hearing the musical tones of a REQUIEM being performed in memory of me. I'm wishing I could just start my life over from the moment that they severed my UMBILICAL cord. I want off of this slow-moving, lifeless MENOPAUSE-like MERRY-GO-ROUND that I'm on inside this little SHANTY at the back end of my home where the only enjoyment I've experienced of late is sipping on a MOCHA LATTE. I feel like I need some kind of sensual experience to come over me like a TSUNAMI requiem shanty tsunami gopher Black Forest melodrama demolition librarian inside-out scavenger I'm a scavenger living near the border of the Black Forest. There are plenty of gophers under my patch of garden, ruining my tiny lawn and plants. It's no melodrama, but I'd sure like to hear a requiem for these annoying critters. I used to be a librarian until a tsunami wrecked our town, leaving everything inside-out. Along came the demolition squad, so that's why I'm now living from hand to mouth. melodrama demolition librarian inside-out scavenger Sharm el Sheik wrist watch Covent Garden Aphrodite pumpkin [color="#666666"][/color] ······· ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner       |
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Rhymer Earlier I was taking part in a Scavenger hunt with... Nov 28 20, 09:46 JustDaniel I've substituted "requisite" for... Nov 28 20, 10:58 Rhymer Having no idea what a Croissan’wich might taste li... Nov 28 20, 13:05 JustDaniel Nervous Nellie
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site... Dec 11 20, 19:12 Rhymer Having Sighted your Mansion, Sited onshore, to whi... Dec 12 20, 10:53 JustDaniel Does that mean that you'll no longer play this... Dec 12 20, 11:36 
JustDaniel How far back did you find THIS list, Sylvia?
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