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 Apr 16 18, 22:39
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 11,722 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in.  |
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There are no words which might express the gratitude and happiness that fills my heart each morn and eve. I’m always reticent to leave my new back porch but I confess a friend who thought that he would bless me with this gift without redress merits the praise he would receive. There are no words! He took what once was one big mess in my back yard when I said yes to kindness. I could not conceive that this, his best recitative, would shelter me. I’d have to guess there are no words. S2/L2 did end in "could not believe" S3/L1-2 did read: He took what once was a big mess of a back yard... Thanks Daniel! ·······  ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
  
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May 14 18, 16:28
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,923 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Hey, I've been in too much pain to do serious crit for some time...
but glad to help eventually! deLightingly, Daniel 
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