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Larry
post Feb 6 18, 15:14
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Knighthood ABC’s

Attempting to
become the king’s
crusader who
defends all things;
exacting pain
for those that might
gather to gain
his throne will fight
in town and field.
Jousting or blade
keeps those who yield
life’s blood in glade
midst heather’s blooms,
no quarter set
or path to tombs’
position get
quiescent rest.
Respect the crown,
sovereign is blessed
to rule this town
until I fall.
Valor or pain
with those who call
Xanadu’s reign
your kingdom’s rule.
Zealot or fool?


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JustDaniel
post Feb 8 18, 08:58
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I'm not sure what an extended sonnet is, but you've accomplished quite a feat with these melodic quartets and closing rhyming couplet! Extremely well-done!

deLightingly, Daniel sun.gif


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