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 Jan 2 18, 22:35
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 11,717 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in.  |
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Would that those who had come to pen their thoughts and dreams without chagrin had stayed around much longer when their peers chimed in. Their peers chimed in to help with some critiqued advice and hoped suggestions would suffice to polish gems that shined like ice which would be nice. What would be nice if all the folks who left came back into Mosaic’s little shack to show their expertise or lack but want the knack. They want the knack. ·······  ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
  
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Jan 19 18, 07:17
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,920 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
... and of course I see that even in my last response to you I forgot about the restatement in each of the fourth lines! I needed to observe longer and better!
sLightly MORE red, Daniel 
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Larry The Knack Jan 2 18, 22:35 
JustDaniel You have a knack with that old pen
to cause my bra... Jan 7 18, 09:12 Larry Hi Daniel,
Glad to see you back with pen in hand.... Jan 7 18, 23:08 JustDaniel I can't believe I erred again
and blotched my ... Jan 8 18, 00:05 Larry Just Human
Although we’re human, as it were
and w... Jan 8 18, 23:05 
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