 Ragnarök – The Twilight of the Gods, Painting only |
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 Aug 20 17, 07:38
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 Babylonian  Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none  |
Painting by Lynda Lu
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Number of downloads: 2The Solar Eclipse 2017 Baldur the Sun-god is reborn. Text removed 9-11=16 ·······  ·······~~~~
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Sep 12 17, 08:04
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,722 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
Hey Ali,
I really wish you hadn't removed the poem you had posted here under your wife's painting. I had worked for two weeks with a critique even though I seldom come to this forum. I'm a dyed-in-the-wool R&M kind of guy but "Ragnarok" was not only an interesting piece but also a very good ancient history lesson. I just dumped my critique! Oh well, my first thoughts on seeing the painting was that of an immense scaled dragon peering at the world through one eye. I enjoyed your poem while it was up. Thanks for your insight and for sharing. Larry ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
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Ali zonak Ragnarök – The Twilight of the Gods Aug 20 17, 07:38 
Ali zonak QUOTE (Larry @ Sep 12 17, 08:04 ) Hey Ali... Sep 13 17, 15:48 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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