 Two Lighthouses, photos by Ali Zonak, NEW CHALLENGE: Inspirational pictures for poets |
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 Aug 4 17, 11:01
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 Babylonian  Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none  |
Greetings to all poets and writers:
This week we have two lovely pictures provided by our fellow poet Ali Zonak. They are here to inspire all of you to write sonnets, ballads, villanelles or any other form you wish. You may also write FV poems and short stories. Select both or one of the pictures. 
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Number of downloads: 3MM always looks forward to your answers to these challenges. Can't wait! Good luck, Psyche       
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Aug 19 17, 21:40
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,722 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
Hey Ali,
If you will notice in the stanza above "Miasma", I used the word fog which is what Websters' defines as a murk, miasma, thick haze, etc.. Not wanting to be redundant, I used a different word. Besides, it matched the metrical flow of the sonnet. Glad you enjoyed. Larry ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
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Aug 20 17, 06:31
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Babylonian Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none |
QUOTE (Larry @ Aug 19 17, 21:40 )  Hey Ali, If you will notice in the stanza above "Miasma", I used the word fog which is what Websters' defines as a murk, miasma, thick haze, etc.. Not wanting to be redundant, I used a different word. Besides, it matched the metrical flow of the sonnet. Glad you enjoyed. Larry Hi Larry; actually, in the given context "miasma" does work quite well. As said before, no nits. I wonder where our friend Eagle-eye Daniel might be these days? Greetings to him and all the other absentees. Take care, Ali ······· ·······~~~~
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Ali zonak Two Lighthouses, photos by Ali Zonak Aug 4 17, 11:01 
Psyche Hi Ali,
I've moved your lovely lighthouses ove... Aug 10 17, 23:01 
Ali zonak QUOTE (Psyche @ Aug 11 17, 00:01 ) Hi Ali... Aug 11 17, 06:35 Larry for the lighthouse painted like a barber pole
Fo... Aug 11 17, 16:06 Ali zonak QUOTE (Larry @ Aug 11 17, 16:06 ) for the... Aug 11 17, 19:24 JustDaniel I will give this some thought for a sonnet;
the pa... Aug 12 17, 03:41 Larry and on a more serious note...
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An emb... Aug 16 17, 13:56 Ali zonak QUOTE (Larry @ Aug 16 17, 14:56 ) and on ... Aug 17 17, 14:33 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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