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 Babylonian  Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none  |
Hi all!
Oh Gad, this site is nearly dead, yet sweeter than the one I’d fled; I must lament Australia Times that often rang this poet’s chimes. To Maureen fond wishes I extend— though incognito, yet as friend. I want to greet you, noble band, as I return from foreign land, i.g. a site that (to me) is dead. ·······  ·······~~~~
It is a poem’s absolute perfection that can lead to its imperfection. ~~~~ |
  
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,722 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
Hi Ali,
Glad to see you over here in Karnak joining in on the fun Daniel and I have been having. We usually do not critique these posts unless necessary when parameters are overstepped. You might go back to the first of the string to review the rules of the Short Rondeau. You did get away from tetrameter in your post and you did not end it with a small portion of the beginning of the first line. This is just a FYI. If you want to join in on the string, welcome. Larry ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
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Ali zonak Short Rondeau about this and that. Jun 26 17, 13:52 
Ali zonak QUOTE (Larry @ Jun 26 17, 18:20 ) Hi Ali,... Jun 27 17, 10:26 
JustDaniel Several comments here, Ali...
Larry DID mention t... Jun 27 17, 12:34 Larry Hi Ali,
To clarify my tiny nits: I never said yo... Jun 29 17, 09:01 Larry A Short Rondeau in answer to yours!
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