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 Babylonian  Posts: 102 Joined: 22-June 17 From: Arizona, USA Member No.: 5,325 Real Name: Ali Zonak Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:none  |
Glad to be aboard. I have many interests, such as writing, oil painting, classical music (I play several instruments, my latest--the harp--in preparation for my eventual command performance in heaven). Going on 83 years young, in body and spirit, I'm not packing my suitcase for that destination--or another--yet. Learn more about me and my stuff on https://www.jerrykspoetry.com
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,722 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
Hi Ali,
Glad to have you aboard and welcome to MM. Glad you have come to the same conclusion about the Mosaic I came to when I joined a few years ago. The critique is helpful and everyone here tries to make the writer feel comfortable in every post. Not a lot of undeserved back-slapping goes on and very little if any harsh words are ever exchanged. I am (and always have been) an R&M type writer specializing in sonnets, rondeaus and limericks. I did see your post "Stardust" and am working on a few comments mainly dealing with line lengths and word usage. If you desire critiques, place from one to three (*, **, ***) asterisks after the title of your post. One is light, two is medium and three is thorough and concise suggestions to help you polish your piece to perfection. Anyway, welcome home! Larry ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
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Ali zonak Ali here; Jun 23 17, 14:43 
Ali zonak Thank you for the welcome, Larry;
I'm impress... Jun 24 17, 17:57 Eisa Hi Ali,
Welcome to Mosaic Musings.
It's g... Jun 26 17, 15:09 JustDaniel Welcome again to MM, Ali...
and by the way, PLEAS... Jul 1 17, 17:48 Psyche Hi Ali and welcome to Mosaic Musings.
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Ali zonak QUOTE (Psyche @ Jul 26 17, 23:38 ) Hi Ali... Jul 27 17, 06:56 Psyche Thank you, Ali, for your kind comments. Falling is... Aug 3 17, 23:49 Ali zonak QUOTE (Psyche @ Aug 3 17, 23:49 ) Thank y... Aug 4 17, 14:39 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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