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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
For a shared coffee
she'd seemingly be your confidante promising to dispel your woes. Her flashing green nail polish will lead you to reflection of a forests entrance unlike anything seen. Until your soul wades into a bag of pumpkin seeds. So much for empathy Perhaps this was her smile. Her own barbwire rouge. ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
A powerful lady indeed !
I really love pumpkin seeds sprinkled on salads - but wading through them is a different matter! I really enjoyed this one. Eira ······· ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner            |
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greenwich The kiss off Nov 28 16, 15:33 
Psyche Hi Antony,
Good one, Antony, but I have to admit ... Nov 28 16, 16:37 greenwich Imagine wading through a packet of pumpkin seeds. ... Nov 29 16, 12:23 
Psyche OMG, Antony, wading thru' pumpkin seeds seems ... Dec 4 16, 00:52 Ali zonak Hi, Greenwich,
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