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 Nov 28 16, 15:33
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
For a shared coffee
she'd seemingly be your confidante promising to dispel your woes. Her flashing green nail polish will lead you to reflection of a forests entrance unlike anything seen. Until your soul wades into a bag of pumpkin seeds. So much for empathy Perhaps this was her smile. Her own barbwire rouge. ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Nov 29 16, 12:23
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Assyrian Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy |
Imagine wading through a packet of pumpkin seeds. I am sure you'd drown . Naturally you have to sink to do this
That's the power of this lady. ······· ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Dec 4 16, 00:52
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 10,013 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
OMG, Antony, wading thru' pumpkin seeds seems to be a formidable challenge.
Must be wary of such powerful ladies... LOL. I wish you all the best, Syl  QUOTE (greenwich @ Nov 29 16, 14:23 )  Imagine wading through a packet of pumpkin seeds. I am sure you'd drown . Naturally you have to sink to do this That's the power of this lady. ······· ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner              |
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greenwich The kiss off Nov 28 16, 15:33 
Psyche Hi Antony,
Good one, Antony, but I have to admit ... Nov 28 16, 16:37 
Eisa A powerful lady indeed !
I really love pumpk... Dec 7 16, 17:32 
Ali zonak Hi, Greenwich,
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