 A LEAK FROM ON HIGH ***, From 2015 Holiday Classic |
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 Dec 19 15, 17:57
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends  |
A LEAK FROM ON HIGH
A rumor has it, something big's going down. Holiday Inn's packed it's all over the town But nobody knows yet, quite what it could be opinions run riot not a single room's free They're packing them in outhouses and stable wherever they'll fit - most uncomfortable Three Wise Men journey they're not travelling blind with some precious gifts seem to know what's in mind ? They'd done their planning days before, from afar a vision, they claim to pursue a bright Star So how did they know and what gave them the tip who leaked their purpose before start of their trip ? Not secure, their plan someone had the detail had to be Big Man Who knew it would not fail Thus Jesus was born in a humble hay stack with Three Kings so wise AND THERE'S NO GOING BACK ! Alan McAlpine Douglas ·······  ······· |
  
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 9,142 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
Greetings, Alan! Long time no see...LOL. Hope your muse doesn't go thataway again. No idea when your birthday was, but here's hoping all your wishes come true.  Read your take on nativity, no crits or nits... So whistleblowers were around way back then! Consequences were awful, I mean Herod killing all the babes.  Happy Christmas to you and all your family, Syl*** ······· ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner              |
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Alan A LEAK FROM ON HIGH *** Dec 19 15, 17:57 
Merlin Merry Christmas, Alan, and hoping you're enjoy... Dec 19 15, 18:38 JustDaniel Thank you for the deLightful take on the natal sto... Dec 19 15, 19:13 Alan Dear Merlin and Daniel,
Thank you both so much fo... Dec 19 15, 20:22 Alan Dear Sylvia,
Thank you for the warm (re)welcome. ... Dec 21 15, 04:05 AMETHYST Hello Alan,
It is so wonderful to read your poet... Dec 21 15, 18:37 
Alan Dear Liz,
FanTASTic to hear from you again ! ... Dec 21 15, 20:32 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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