 Loglimerhyme, Larry Jennings' variant of Logarhyme w/ 332332 pulse meter |
 Mar 7 13, 14:13
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Loglimerhyme is Larry Jennings' metrical variant of the standard iambic of Logarhymes. In place of the usual 442442-iamb meter, he utilizes a limerick-like pattern of 332332 pulses in each sextet (6-line) stanza. The rhyme pattern is that of the standard Logarhyme: AABCCB. My own dubbing of Larry's variant as 'Loglimerhyme' has met with his approval. Here is his first (so far as I know) such creation: Loglimerhyme #1 If that pie were mincemeat, I would choke though I know it's enjoyed by some folk, never been one of them. Coconut or pecan on the beach sounds quite nice. Think I'd have one of each or key-lime. On a whim, I have tried other country's cuisine with delight, though some were garish green made from sea-weed, I guess. Others curried and spiced with, "who knows?" They were delicacies I suppose but not mine. I confess to a penchant for food from the south. Etouffee or gumbo in my mouth is like Heaven on earth. Though from Texas, I like chili too and a big plate of good barbecue which might add to my girth. Thank the Lord for my genetic past which made my metabolic rate fast; sedentary I'm not. I work harder now that I'm retired. It's as if gardening has conspired that I not go to pot. © Larry D Jennings 13 April 2012 After a several-riposte discussion between Larry and myself, this is my own first Loglimerhyme: Loglimerhyme Approbation Loglimerhymes seem really fun; though surely for not everyone, so I offer you mine. I certainly do understand and certify your fledgling brand; it's deliciously fine. Iamb sure that you'll note that iambs are required in pure Logarhyme brand yet your variant is but a breath of fresh air to my ears so I hope this allays any fears and you won't let it fizz. © MLee Dickens'son 18 April 2012 Here's hoping others will join in on the fun! deLightingly, Daniel 
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JustDaniel Loglimerhyme Mar 7 13, 14:13 
Larry Thanks, Daniel. I appreciate your starting a new ... Mar 11 13, 12:22 JustDaniel Well, with Alan rejoining our crew,
let's expe... Mar 11 13, 13:53 Larry It's not membership. We have a lot,
but parti... Mar 14 13, 09:20 JustDaniel Much of what we write stays bottled here
where we ... Mar 14 13, 13:31 Larry I refuse to go lightly and will,
like the engine t... Mar 17 13, 18:43 JustDaniel I'm afraid that is out of our hands;
we do not... Mar 18 13, 08:36 Larry Sharecroppers
Interaction is just what we need,
e... Apr 1 13, 16:01 Cleo_Serapis Your words are heartfelt.
Even I have lost my poe... Apr 2 13, 06:28 Larry Hi Lori,
I'm sorry you feel bad. I didn... Apr 2 13, 17:20 Cleo_Serapis Gosh Larry - no worries. Actually, I am glad to se... Apr 3 13, 07:49 JustDaniel Our Loglimerhymes ain't for complaint
so I hop... Apr 5 13, 14:53 Larry I’m so glad Lori came here to read
our Loglimerhym... Apr 22 13, 14:20 JustDaniel Whether new or renewal of old,
we will welcome the... Apr 22 13, 14:38 Larry Though our fear of demise is allayed
there is some... Apr 26 13, 17:50 Larry Have a Bite
I see my admonitions were vague
for t... Jul 16 13, 15:07 Cleo_Serapis It is catchy Larry but requires my noggin to reall... Jul 16 13, 21:11 Larry I’ll just push the old Loglimerhyme
to the top and... Oct 30 13, 14:34 JustDaniel Who could mess up a Loglimerhyme?
It's not har... Nov 1 13, 07:26 Larry A loose game? Bet you can’t write just one.
It’s ... Nov 13 13, 00:06 JustDaniel Out of the Dumps
If you're up to your butt wr... Nov 27 13, 10:48 Larry Writer's Camp
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No new crowd has arrived. Wonder why?
... Jun 23 15, 11:03 JustDaniel Want your prose or your poetry honed?
There's ... Jun 23 15, 15:23 Larry It's all free? That's too good to be true... Jun 24 15, 13:04 Larry From the shaft of forgotten new forms
I have dredg... Sep 8 15, 15:51 JustDaniel So you think your loglimerhymes sing
even without ... Sep 10 15, 03:03 Larry What you do with the brew at this time
will not ma... Sep 10 15, 18:54 JustDaniel If your pile on your thanks I am pleased
because t... Sep 11 15, 10:10 Larry On my own, would this form now exist
as a Logarhym... Sep 13 15, 15:13 JustDaniel Will it go in their files if they come
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