Autumn's Breeze, Huitain Options

[Larry]

Autumn’s Breeze

Forestall that chilling breath which augurs change
and pirouettes the leaves in slow ballets
on air. Your choreographies arrange
them on the ground in colors that amaze.
Spare some that early fate while summer wanes
to give the forests time to fully blaze
and me, warm afternoons in quiet lanes
to thank how nature's palette lets me gaze.



the last line did read: to see how nature's palette can amaze

[Larry]

Hi John,

Thank you for the visit. You don't know how surprised I was to find someone else posting on MM other than
Daniel, Eric, Rhymer and myself.

I do appreciate the kudos and wish you would come back and post some of your own. You are not a slouch
when it comes to poetry yourself.

Again, thanks,

Larry