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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 19,937 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
What Does it Mean?
What does it mean to please someone? Do anything to get along? or should I work to understand, befriend, and try to lend a hand? At times, the process won't be fun. What pleases God? Look to His Son. Attend His Word; know right from wrong. What's PC? No! Seek true peace, and What does it mean? Is there something that will atone? Can we talk on the telephone? To reconcile's no magic wand; relationships have shifting sand. Ask God to guide; don't act alone. What does it mean? © MLee Dickens'son 2014 ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Nov 17 14, 18:27
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 Creative Chieftain Posts: 11,722 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in. |
What Larry Saw
What Larry saw… Daniel’s request was thought, at first, to be a jest but asterisks, from one to three meant some critique was asked of me so off I ran at his behest. “What does it mean” was not the best Rondeau he’s written, probably; near rhyme and verse were metrically What Larry saw. Could this be ruse or just a test from he whose tongue always caressed his cheek? I guessed it was a plea but I was wrong from “a” to “z”. My brain’s shut down for I’ve confessed what Larry saw. ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner     |
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JustDaniel What Does it Mean? *** (Crit welcomed) Nov 12 14, 15:03 
Larry Hi Daniel, long time no see!
First of all, yo... Nov 13 14, 12:56 JustDaniel Thank you for trying to understand my poor communi... Nov 15 14, 05:58 JustDaniel What Larry saw was quite correct.
It's not cri... Nov 18 14, 19:58 Larry Hi Daniel,
I never said I didn't understand w... Nov 19 14, 00:05 JustDaniel Hey, Larry
YOUR communication was very clear to m... Nov 20 14, 10:03 Thoth Daniel
For me each poem must select its own form ... Nov 24 14, 07:01 Thoth Daniel
For me each poem must select its own form ... Nov 24 14, 07:02 
Psyche Oops, Daniel, I missed this one altogether. Far to... Feb 25 15, 23:52 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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