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 Mar 20 14, 13:22
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 Nomad  Posts: 25 Joined: 9-May 09 Member No.: 793 Real Name: Jeanne Fiedler Writer of: Poetry Referred By:web  |
The birth of spring
a renaissance of new life patterns beginning again as intoxicating scents of blossoms and greenery or a soft tear of a raindrop on a petal We slow down and let our relaxation spin us around a little carefree and innocent childlike - we discover anew the water adrift - our bodies serene We are full of creativity and dream of romance Songs of the breeze a white cottage where our spirits reside We relive this vibration year after year each time a fresh new outlook where dew leaves its impression on our minds - a new start - the beginning of a new adventure |
  
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Aug 13 14, 07:32
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
I do not know what the fuss is about. Spring has arrived. And well identified. I can only find praise for a well written, easy to read piece of poetry. Regards, John ·······  ·······Arnfinn
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jeannefiedler Bliss *** Mar 20 14, 13:22 
Maggie Beautiful poem, Jeanne. Spring has been written a... Mar 20 14, 15:24 Maureen Enjoyed the read of your lovely poem Jeanne - diff... Apr 12 14, 19:55 Eisa Hi Jeanne, I love seasonal poems and as it is spri... Apr 19 14, 14:02 jeannefiedler I completed a new revision. Thanks for the critiqu... May 2 14, 05:22 
Psyche Hi Jeanne,
This is a lovely, radiant poem abou... Aug 14 14, 23:40 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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