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 Jul 19 14, 10:13
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Wanderlust
She greets the morn' with tantalizing grace and flits along an unsuspecting breeze. Her wonderland awaits. Moments she'd freeze if only she could find her long-lost place. Among a floral canvas, splendor calls where boundaries are scaled. No longer walls preclude her progress; winsome turns she'll drift! Entwined within bright blooms, she hides her face and dines on woodland's nectar. She's a tease! Companions of the glen can never seize her boundless will. Yet, always there's a trace . . . And when her time has come to pass, we'll see true loveliness preserved: Perception's gift and wonder if somehow, she could be me. Copyright © Lorraine M Kanter 15 July 2014 ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
  
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Aug 10 14, 14:33
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Why hello Sylvia and thanks for dropping into my Sonnet adventure!
  Yeah, I have some old free verse I can revisit, but I don't live up to you caliber in that space!  AND thanks, it's been a long while since I've been posting! Nice to be missed!  I like your ideas for that line I'm stumped on and will ponder further. Moments is really what I am going for but the iamb is off with that word choice. Yes, canvas is metaphorical (like all my stuff, lol)  and was envisioning the meadows/garden as a canvas of nature. I'll ponder some there too.Thanks for stopping by and giving me lots to think about Sylvia! It's always nice to have you drop into my topics!  Cheers, ~Cleo 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Cleo_Serapis Wanderlust ** Jul 19 14, 10:13 
jerryk Hi Lori,
now let's see who the mysterious ... Jul 19 14, 17:27 
Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (jerryk @ Jul 19 14, 18:27 ) Hi Lor... Jul 21 14, 07:27 Thoth Mmh . . .who is this minuscule ethereal spirit? I ... Jul 20 14, 01:32 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE (Thoth @ Jul 20 14, 02:32 ) Mmh . .... Jul 21 14, 07:35 Psyche Hi Lori!
What delicately inspiring lines i... Aug 1 14, 23:18 Keith Logan Hi Lorri,
as usual, I enjoy your writing and find... Aug 5 14, 02:28 Cleo_Serapis Why hello Keith!
Hahaha - I find my writing ... Aug 10 14, 14:38 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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