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post Sep 22 13, 09:13
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A Distant Planet

and there,
Beside the thundering waterfall of his heart,
I rubbed my eyes and thought, “I’m lost.”

............................... Rafael Campo


I said,
it's like lifting a cello
out of its case

“but what do I know
of love's lonely offices”

I'm positive,
he said...
so I chanted
the sweaty shaman's
painted curse

I'd look
inside his throat
to see his misery,
he'd touch his genitals
and think of sin


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Maureen
post Oct 1 13, 16:55
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I wouldn't change anything either - you say so much with so little and I think that works really well. Such a difficult subject HIV and one most people prefer to avoid and/or ignore and yet sadly it is still so much a part of everyday life but the pot seems to have gone off the boil with it - the warnings and paranoi that walked side by side with it in the early days seem to have fallen into the background of late. Maybe people think we've beaten it - I don't know


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