QUOTE(Athena @ Feb. 20 2004, 03:11)
Visualizing
I sit
contemplating
returning to your arms
wondering how soon it will be
hurry
© D R Harris - 19 February 2004
Hello Dolly~
You have me wanting to write a cinquain. (haven't in a long while)
In your brevity, you bring passionate imagery with a strong ending.
I love the title too as it sets the stage well.
An excellent cinquain, indeed! :pharoah2 :pharoah2
Blessings~
Lindi