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Athena
post Feb 20 04, 04:11
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Visualizing

I sit
contemplating
returning to your arms
wondering how soon it will be;
hurry ...

© D R Harris - 19 February 2004
 
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Aphrodite
post Feb 20 04, 19:42
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QUOTE(Athena @ Feb. 20 2004, 03:11)
Visualizing

I sit
contemplating
returning to your arms
wondering how soon it will be
hurry

© D R Harris - 19 February 2004

Hello Dolly~

You have me wanting to write a cinquain. (haven't in a long while)

In your brevity, you bring passionate imagery with a strong ending.
I love the title too as it sets the stage well.  wave.gif  wave.gif

An excellent cinquain, indeed! :pharoah2  :pharoah2

Blessings~
Lindi


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