 Cinquain Train, Interactive Cinquain - Come play! |
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Hi Folks~
 Following Dolly's lead here and after reading and interacting with you all in the Haiku and Tetractys Train threads, I've decided to start a SEPARATE thread for an Interactive Cinquain Train. Same rules (to quote Dolly): I'll write a cinquain, and then the next person begins theirs with the last line of mine, the next person begins theirs with the last line on that one, etc. They do NOT have to be on the same subject, but they CAN be if you wish. It's all up to YOU! Whattaya think? Shall we give it a go? How about attempting to write one a day for 15 or 30 days in a row? Anyone game to commit to this endeavor? I'll begin this thread: Angels;
behest His love. Seldom seen, always felt, everlasting serenity. Guide us. ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 19,923 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
around
this neighborhood it’s good to read last page lest someone act like you’re not there. ahem ahem… hey, Athena It’s good that I know you or I might think this personal… thankful? QUOTE thankful
I haven’t yet... along with so much else... lost my mind, though some would debate that fact ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Cleo_Serapis Cinquain Train Feb 1 04, 20:11 
Dear Cleo
I'm game, see below :
THE XXXVIIIT... Feb 1 04, 20:32 Cleo_Serapis Clever! Feb 1 04, 20:51 Athena Thank you, Lori! Yes, I really like inte... Feb 2 04, 00:47 CON-FESS
For us
to survive well,
there must be ho... Feb 2 04, 05:45 JustDaniel It’s true; I saw it
in truth
we all must lie
if w... Feb 2 04, 09:45 I MARRIED EWE
I snore,
she says; she lies;
and sh... Feb 2 04, 10:17 Dove In dreams
I watch you sleep,
brush hair off your t... Feb 2 04, 12:39 SACRIFICIAL
and sigh,
and weep, and die,
ye sacri... Feb 2 04, 16:47 verchMorrighan of war--
when time as drums
incessantly sounding
r... Feb 3 04, 14:49 JustDaniel in death
I see the end
of struggles here below;
... Feb 4 04, 08:07 Athena Awaits
without us still
we yet have work to do
do ... Feb 4 04, 16:48 PROLE PRODS PRONE
Patients
are those who wait
lyi... Feb 4 04, 20:45 Athena Waiting
Patience
is what we seek
endeavoring eac... Feb 4 04, 22:15 JustDaniel Visa Versa
wee hope
for pro-State men
and thos... Feb 4 04, 23:20 Athena Safety First!
Abroad
just to be safe
maybe we... Feb 4 04, 23:33 WATER WORLD
Make plans,
if going away,
to be flus... Feb 5 04, 02:55 JustDaniel home cultivation
water
tender violet
whisper her ... Feb 5 04, 06:54 Athena Hearing The Voice
de light
shines upon us
when we... Feb 7 04, 21:18 JustDaniel All spies
the thyme
each seasoning
all sounds in ... Feb 8 04, 06:22 CONTEMPLATING OVERTIME
He knows
race/life results... Feb 8 04, 06:29 Cleo_Serapis Must try
to leave on time
at work day's end; There... Feb 8 04, 10:26 JustDaniel to leave
feeble excuse
as if it were offered
is to... Feb 8 04, 19:31 Athena Considering
methinks
windmill tilting
should be ... Feb 8 04, 19:45 Athena We All Bleed
Like us
around the world
we are all ... Feb 13 04, 02:05 Dove Ask God:
why do we grow
old, when senility
turns u... Feb 13 04, 16:08 JustDaniel bay bees
are not as swarm
as some ducks might ex-p... Feb 13 04, 18:54 GULLED AGAIN
Bake gulls
in crusty pie;
blackbird ... Feb 13 04, 19:11 JustDaniel lo overhead
pique one
o’ them bay gulls
an’ he’ll... Feb 13 04, 22:47 Athena Storm Clouds
heads up
showers ahead
raining sprea... Feb 13 04, 23:30 JustDaniel Note: "Shoobie" has long been the derisive term f... Feb 16 04, 11:20 Cleo_Serapis Drop in
from time to time,
relieve your writer's b... Feb 16 04, 18:40 JustDaniel thankful
I haven’t yet...
along with so much else.... Feb 16 04, 18:48 Cleo_Serapis CUTE Daniel! Feb 16 04, 18:49 Athena Attitudes
Thankful
people always
have a special ... Feb 16 04, 23:04 Athena Hi All,
It appears I made the same mistake our Gr... Feb 16 04, 23:44 JustDaniel near-knowledge
for life
to be enjoyed
it's be... Feb 17 04, 03:11 Cybele Some nerve!
all edged
around with gold;
weddi... Feb 17 04, 05:43 JustDaniel webbed intrigue
no whey?
cried Miss Muffet
before... Feb 17 04, 07:40 NARCISSUS IN LOVE
Herm eel -
even-handed
when it ... Feb 17 04, 08:22 Zeus˛
Humptee-Dumptee granted poetic license for 2468... Feb 17 04, 12:40 blondie Mighty Woman
Just quit,
says foolish man
one who ... Feb 17 04, 14:25 Cleo_Serapis These are GREAT! (As my friend Tony the Tiger says... Feb 17 04, 19:44 Athena YES, YES, YES! That would be super, Lori... Feb 17 04, 23:34 JustDaniel Comin right up... but first... to continue the Nur... Feb 18 04, 04:43 Athena That's really a cute one, Daniel! A ... Feb 18 04, 05:03 JustDaniel Buns first
warm their bottoms
on the Limerick Trai... Feb 18 04, 05:21 Athena QUOTE (Just Daniel @ Feb. 18 2004, 02:21)Buns... Feb 20 04, 01:49 Cleo_Serapis But when?
We ask does time
stand still that we may... Mar 10 04, 18:20 Athena Right now
I'm so happy,
wedding day approaches... Mar 11 04, 02:00 Dove Soon love
will find grasses
to grow in and wine fi... Mar 12 04, 04:45 Cleo_Serapis All ripe
from wedding day
feeling fresh and renewe... Mar 12 04, 06:19 Athena CONGRATS
also due
for those who remain loyal,
hold... Mar 13 04, 06:23 Cleo_Serapis Nurtured
from thought to pen
and then a masterpiec... May 13 04, 16:20 Cleo_Serapis Artists
articulate
amateur allegros
alerting ... May 20 04, 07:46 Dove Afar
lights are bobbing
like a plastic, smooth dol... May 20 04, 11:43 Cleo_Serapis At sea
sailing ships bob,
waving to sounds mystic
... May 21 04, 05:11 Zeus˛ Helix, ( Spiral, per Jessica's watchful eye)
i... May 21 04, 09:21 Dove sweet zeus...you do know your first word needs to ... May 21 04, 12:25 Our jeans
were once stone-washed;
the one and only... May 21 04, 13:10 Cleo_Serapis Water
is nourishment
needed for all living
blossom... Jun 6 04, 08:47 SUMMER EVENING GLASSES,
AND SOME ARE EVEN IN PINT... Jun 6 04, 09:17 Athena Gosh, it's been months since I've tried on... Jun 8 04, 02:30 JustDaniel 'er moor
is lade of heath
an' ankle-deep s... Jun 8 04, 05:46 Cleo_Serapis Flied lice!
me not so nice
when mixed in with whit... Jun 9 04, 15:15 JustDaniel Cannes to Philly
yule sea
a stout, lone ship
brav... Jun 10 04, 07:25 BECALMED
To use
a metaphor
good poetry is a smoot... Jun 10 04, 16:06 Zeus˛ Pit ye
against others,
noble writings and lore,
bu... Jun 10 04, 17:24 JustDaniel suck cess
from that old pool
that's hidden dee... Jun 10 04, 21:30 RESENTFULLY DANCING IN THE PARK
or
TREADING (in) ... Jun 11 04, 00:10 JustDaniel she'd sue
you if she knew
how you'd per ve... Jun 11 04, 06:07 Cleo_Serapis No sheet
of ghostly white
for a spooked spirit com... Jun 12 04, 08:03 JustDaniel one sloshed
through frigid sleet
with burning hear... Jun 12 04, 13:35 NO LOVE
With warmth
and affection,
best wishes, a... Jun 12 04, 13:58 Zeus˛ Luv is
what you make it,
tender, sweet, romantic,
... Jun 12 04, 17:01 JustDaniel God looks
at gamblers
who cast their lot to luck
f... Jun 12 04, 23:07 WINNER
snake eyes
prey, prays to God,
sprays inci... Jun 13 04, 02:31 Athena And sleep
comes upon us
although we thought it wou... Jun 13 04, 11:37 JustDaniel a fresh
new start we need
with each morn's daw... Jun 13 04, 13:25 Cleo_Serapis Again
the day begins
renewed - my mind travels
to... Jun 13 04, 17:10 AFAR
Afar ?
Far better thing
that I should stay a... Jun 14 04, 01:40 JustDaniel the work
bids me to go
but I would rather leave
th... Jun 14 04, 06:36 CAUSATION
Mine 'ost
welcomes me here;
his bar... Jun 14 04, 07:36 Cleo_Serapis Mine 'ole
box 'o tissues
is getting quite thinned ... Jun 15 04, 05:18 JustDaniel go 'way
o mournin' tears
go weigh yer bles... Jun 15 04, 05:46 Zeus˛ You blew
away, the chance
to go straight and narro... Jun 15 04, 06:26 HITCHY FINGERS
Y-knot,
when you can reef,
or slip... Jun 15 04, 10:52 JustDaniel in doubt
that I would be
able to walk it straight
... Jun 15 04, 14:10 KNOTTED
Knotted,
I pine for you
fir goodness sake... Jun 15 04, 14:53 Zeus˛ Once more
the threads of life,
being woven again
i... Jun 15 04, 16:05 Dear Larry,
Would you care to recast the last lin... Jun 15 04, 16:20 Zeus˛ Alan,
made the change, wasn't thinking, too ca... Jun 15 04, 17:11 TRIPPING
Tango'd,
waltzed, fox trotted;
rumba... Jun 15 04, 17:20 Zeus˛
Footwork,
fast and nimble,
Gene Kelly dancing bi... Jun 15 04, 19:43 PRACTICE
Practice
makes perfectly
bored with any... Jun 16 04, 01:22 AMETHYST In now,
through opened doors
to ride the rails wit... Jun 16 04, 01:46 Dear Liz,
To hell with cinquains, just to say HEL... Jun 16 04, 02:26 LIZ
Out ? Loud ?
In, and quiet ?
Either way, you... Jun 16 04, 02:46 
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