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Posts: 3,446
Joined: 16-October 06
From: UK
Member No.: 298
Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends
JUST NOT CRICKET
The perfect Sunday afternoon would contain an excellent library book, on something like “The History of Staples”, sharp thwack of supple willow on red ball, monarch butterflies spotted near the pavilion, perfectly captured by previously rigged camera’s iris; plus as a treat - large bowl of canned peach slices in thick syrup with even thicker cream for tea; finally, a look of absolute horror on our tea-ladies’ faces when I scoff the lot, before dozing off in the warm sunshine to distant polite applause ....
(Challenge words : library staples willow red monarch spotted rig iris peaches faces)
Group: Gold Member
Posts: 20,402
Joined: 2-August 03
From: Southwest New Jersey, USA
Member No.: 6
Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr.
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
This is a handsome, light little piece, Alan... but I'm still mystified by the polite applause in the distance. Who is applauding your dozing off? I must be missing something significant.
Just a note: I stumbled in a couple of places where the simple definite article might well be inserted, as its absence seemed a bit distracting and unnatural. God forbid that you'd ever be unnatural!!
deLighting in the prospect of a restart of our interchanges, Daniel