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 Oct 12 10, 09:45
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 Egyptian  Posts: 327 Joined: 17-May 08 From: San Juan Puerto Rico Member No.: 508 Real Name: Sergio Ortiz Writer of: Poetry  |
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what is it about night that you carry it in your mouth beyond the moon’s orbit and time through strange paths frequented by Thanatos and his twin brother? Is whatever just happened already a memory, or are our tongues blushing from the exchanged saliva? Be rid of that black cloak in your eyes. We were the strays that taught God how to die in this queer universe. ·······  ······· |
  
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Oct 26 10, 16:08
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Egyptian Posts: 327 Joined: 17-May 08 From: San Juan Puerto Rico Member No.: 508 Real Name: Sergio Ortiz Writer of: Poetry |
Sylvia I think it has been published but I can no longer keep up with what gets published. I am still interested in suggestions because these poems will be going into a complete collection of poems, my first, and I would like them to be as polished as possible.
I am so sorry for what has happened in your family, what a terrible terrible thing. I am praying for you and your family. abrazos, sergio ······· ······· |
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saore Unusual lover Oct 12 10, 09:45 
Psyche Hi Sergio!
I´ve been very much away from MM du... Oct 26 10, 15:54 
Psyche Thank you, Sergio, for your sincere regrets. The a... Oct 26 10, 17:57 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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