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post Aug 25 10, 13:51
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Curvaceous as a writhing snake,
with Champs-Elysées legs,
she never makes her old mistake
of courting mankind’s dregs
but always picks a chaperone
to match the limelight’s latest tone.

Her hair is always perfect now,
her clothes are custom made;
tight make-up shows designers how
to master nature’s shades;
the tints and textures round her eyes
are meant to tempt and tantalise.

She hasn’t always looked this good
for not so long ago
a skinny kid with attitude
frequented fashion shows
in Oxfam shoes and backcombed hair:
she’s lucky that I found her there.

Amendedments 5 September 2010
S3,l1 - 'didn't' changed to 'hasn't'
S3, l5 - 'worn down heels' changed to 'Oxfam shoes'
 
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Alan
post Aug 25 10, 17:46
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Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas
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Dear Jim,

Shades of "Where do you go to, my darling" ?

Can't stop for details now, but I feel there will be revisions that you want !

Love
Alan


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post Aug 26 10, 14:30
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QUOTE (Alan @ Aug 25 10, 23:46 ) *
Dear Jim,

Shades of "Where do you go to, my darling" ?

Can't stop for details now, but I feel there will be revisions that you want !

Love
Alan

Hi, Alan,

I'm sorry that you have to read so much 'old material' at the moment, still catching up here after a long absence. This was spawned by Mal's reference at BP to Mickey Spillane dialogue of course.
Jim
 
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