The Craft [revised 10 Aug 2010], English Sonnet Options

[Guest_bombadil1247_*]

Revision 2 - 11/8/10

The Craft

Our spoken rhythms form the template phase
which poets redefine in measured time
to mimic conversation's turns of phrase
yet meet the strict conditions made by rhyme.
Once metre has been mastered language calls,
seducing us with sound-born melody;
repeated vowels brick the aural walls,
while consonance cements the prosody.
Apprentice years will teach the bard his art,
set exercises hone the poet’s pen;
improvements, made and measured from the start,
lead learners up to craftsmanship and then,
to challenge preconception’s barren wastes,
push poetry beyond established tastes.

line 4 amended 12/8/10.

Revision 1 - 29/7/10[/u]

The Craft

Our spoken rhythms form the template phase
which poets redefine in measured time
to mimic conversation's turns of phrase
yet meet the strict requirements of rhyme.
Once metre has been mastered, language calls
and bids us mark her sounds as melody;
repeated vowels brick the aural walls,
strung consonants cement the prosody.
Apprentice years will teach the bard his art,
set exercises hone the poet’s pen;
improvements, made and measured from the start,
lead learners up to craftsmanship and then,
to challenge preconception’s barren wastes,
push poetry beyond established tastes.


The Craft- Original

Our spoken rhythms form the template’s base
that poets rearrange in measured lines
to make a match with normal turns of phrase
yet meet the strict requirements of rhyme.
Once metre has been mastered, language calls
and bids us set her sounds as melody;
repeated vowels harmonise the whole
while staggered consonants add symmetry.
Apprentice years will teach the bard his art,
set exercises hone the poet’s pen;
improvements, made and measured from the start,
lead learners up to craftsmanship and then,
to challenge preconception’s barren wastes,
push poetry beyond established tastes.

[Cleo_Serapis]

Hi Jim,

Nice change tehre in L6 - but I see you've gone back to the original for L3:
to make a match with normal turns of phrase.

My personal preference on L6: "to mimic conversation's turns of phrase
yet meet the strict requirements of rhyme".

This is lovely!
~Cleo

[Guest_bombadil1247_*]

Hi Jim,

Nice change tehre in L6 - but I see you've gone back to the original for L3:
to make a match with normal turns of phrase.

My personal preference on L6: "to mimic conversation's turns of phrase
yet meet the strict requirements of rhyme".

This is lovely!
~Cleo

Hi, Cleo,
that's what happens when you edit online and neglect to change the c'-drive copy. Fixed now,
Jim