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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends  |
OUR SAVIOUR FROM THE TORIES
(6 May 2010, general election date announced) Sad profile of my bank account, the complete texture of my life; He’s sheltered me from much self-harm by taxes, excised with state knife. With His moonlight, in soft focus, He spin doctors and tells us lies; on balance I’m much better off. Oh look, there is a pig that flies ! In short cameo performance, He pretends he’s minister, Prime, dispelling my prosperity : Please, River Thames, drown His foul crime. Alan McAlpine Douglas Challenge words : profile texture shelter moonlight balance cameo dispel river ·······  ······· |
  
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Apr 17 10, 10:10
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Laureate Legionnaire Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear Lori,
Thanks for the visit. Glad you approve. Our Great Leader is famous for having announced that he "Saved the World". He seems to be assuming God-like abilities, so it seems only right to Cap him, in a VERY satirical way ! He has been the worst disaster of a PM we have EVER had, and he was never even elected, having always weaselled out of any election, whether to the head of his Labour party, or to us the UK public. He is due to be thoroughly chopped on 6 May. Love Alan ······· ······· |
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Alan OUR SAVIOUR FROM THE TORIES Apr 6 10, 04:51 
ohsteve Alan, Too political for me, I got my own Obama idi... Apr 6 10, 11:14 Sekhmet Hey Steve - We poor Brits have to listen to month ... Apr 7 10, 01:31 Alan Dear Leo,
Thank you for riding to battle for me ... Apr 7 10, 01:55 Sekhmet Sorry Alan - Of course, you are absolutely right. ... Apr 7 10, 04:41 Arnfinn G'day Alan
Written while munching on acid dr... Apr 7 10, 05:27 Alan Dear Leo,
Well now, The CAPS were deliberate, ref... Apr 7 10, 09:11 Alan Dear John,
Thank you, I was drinking neat sulphur... Apr 7 10, 09:13 ohsteve Alan, Leo, I think Alan understood perfectly what ... Apr 8 10, 13:37 Sekhmet Oh Steve! There you go again! Where was y... Apr 9 10, 04:00 Sekhmet I have received a personal message rocket from fro... Apr 11 10, 01:48 Cleo_Serapis Hello Alan et al,
Sorry there seems to have been ... Apr 11 10, 09:16 ohsteve Alan I apologies for the possible misconception th... Apr 11 10, 19:59 Sekhmet Alan - I am very very sorry to see your poem being... Apr 12 10, 01:58 4rum Dear Alan;
I can certainly identify with your e... Apr 12 10, 03:44 Alan Dear Leo and Sam,
Thank you both for the comments... Apr 13 10, 09:17 Larry Hey Alan,
Nice use of the given words. Sometimes... Apr 16 10, 14:14 Eisa Hi Alan
I do admire your ability to use challeng... Apr 16 10, 14:43 Alan Dear Larry,
Thank you, spot on, now "fouler... Apr 17 10, 01:22 Alan Dear Eisa,
Thank you too, more fine spots ! I... Apr 17 10, 01:27 Cleo_Serapis Hi Alan,
I've come to the 'tea party... Apr 17 10, 09:22 
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