I write with my eyes closed Options

[Guest_jackthrockton_*]

Hello all,

I am a novice poet, but experienced writer. I have authored two books, hundreds of articles, and thousands of totally and completely forgettable corporate works. While my passion has been in prose, I have found of late an abiding interest in poetry.

As a newbie, I have no style as yet. I'm exploring different forms and pushing myself to simplify my work, as my poems are sometimes too subtle to many who read them. I write with my eyes closed most of the time. When I write non-fiction, my eyes are open. But in poetry, they are always closed. I use sounds of words and parts of words to generate the lines. Sometimes, the sounds are very clear and the words follow accordingly. Other times, I hit a wall. I hear nothing, see nothing and write nothing.

Of the 20 or so poems I have written so far, I can pick out the one line in each that people will comment on most. I love feedback of all kind, good or bad, if given with honesty but without cruelty. Some critics, I have found, offer very constructive analyses; others seem more intent on reconstruction.

I look forward to participating in the forum.

[Larry]

Hi Jack,

Welcome to MM where I'm sure you will be able to hone your poetry and writing skills. There are many Forums and a very eclectic group of writers who frequent this site. I appreciate your letting us know the level and type of critique you are looking for when you post your work. The Forums are self-explanatory as to what should be posted and the critiques, for the most part, are merely suggestions which you may take or toss at will. We try not to do "rewrites" unless the posted poem/prose/etc. begs for clarity. I've only been here for a year and a half but have received much more in knowledge/skill/writing ability/constructive assistance than I ever did in school. I hope you find this, as I have, a place of contemplative reading and creative writing which will challenge your mind and ability in prose and poetry.

Again, Welcome.

Larry