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 Sep 30 09, 01:03
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends  |
THE AGE OF INDECISION
Cometh the hour, cometh the mantra : UMMMMMMMMMMM .... Alan McAlpine Douglas ·······  ······· |
  
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 Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,967 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Well, Alan... you've got the whole place hummin' with this one. I'm just not sure what to make of it.... or am I. Well, yes I am... no, wait a minute. Do I have to critique this? Not sure, but maybe, well, I guess I might... or should I? Can I take the chance?
Hmmmm... too A's two take this, know? two bees or knot two B's hmmmmm two alls too B knocked down... eye can't de-side 2 much too figure out... hmmmm R U con tent 2 hum a long hmmmmmmmmmmmm? deLighting hear two bees hmmmmmmm, Daniel 
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Alan THE AGE OF INDECISION Sep 30 09, 01:03 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Alan,
Shouldn't you post this one in Shogu... Sep 30 09, 05:38 Alan Dear Lori,
Short yes, but form no ! Do I, or ... Sep 30 09, 12:08 Thoth Alan
I think you just found the lost chord! ... Sep 30 09, 14:11 Alan DearWally,
Did I ? I'm not ummmmmmmmm, you kn... Oct 2 09, 01:41 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Alan,
I've got a funny title for this, I t... Oct 3 09, 11:37 ohsteve Alan, Hey what's the mantra, are you umming ca... Oct 3 09, 16:09 Alan Dear Daniel, Peggy and Steve,
Thank you all for y... Oct 4 09, 01:15 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Alan,
You may be baffled because of my vocabul... Oct 4 09, 02:42 Alan Dear Peggy,
Aha, I would have spelled it "Yu... Oct 5 09, 13:53 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Alan,
Now we're both on the same wave leng... Oct 5 09, 15:27 Alan Dear Peggy,
Now I though that was "Darrrrr-l... Oct 8 09, 01:15 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Alan,
I strongly agree and do get your drift... Oct 8 09, 20:16 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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