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 Babylonian  Posts: 87 Joined: 27-November 06 Member No.: 361 Real Name: Ross Baird Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Mysty  |
Epitaph It all went so fast: I should have looked more; I should have listened, and, perhaps, sometimes felt more before now. ace |
  
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Aug 13 09, 23:49
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 Greek Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi Ace,
Don't think I've met you before. It's a pleasure! Very concise. A bit of good advise you have here. You have three thought-provoking points in this in my opinion, but I believe the title needs work. Also, I believe you incorrectly spelled the title. What I'd like to see for a title is a generalization. Or even better, a catchy title. Maybe something like "Tips From the Grave." Or "The Deceased Speaks." Or "Tombstone Tips" or some such. Again, very nice to meet you!!! Peggy ·······  ······· |
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ace Epitath Aug 4 09, 17:59 
Dee I like it. Simple. True.
Just a couple suggestion... Aug 5 09, 11:57 
ace Dee:
Thanks for the read and the suggestions. ... Aug 5 09, 17:11 Psyche Hi Ace!
My 2 cents... to toss or take! I l... Aug 6 09, 00:21 ace Syl:
Thank you so very much; wish I could hav... Aug 6 09, 13:54 Arnfinn G'day, Ross
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It all went so fast:
I... Aug 7 09, 02:21 Eisa Hi Ace
I like the message in this one and there i... Aug 7 09, 17:37 bipolarwriter Hi. Nice to meet you. I personally enjoyed your po... Aug 22 09, 21:16 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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