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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry  |
The Problem Is…
The problem is... the problem is… The problem is... that my damn problem won't go away. The problem is... the problem is real. The problem is with me morning and night. The problem is... The problem is... The problem is... What was I thinking? Dunno… Hmm… The problem is… the problem is… What was I thinking? The problem is… Geeez, I do have a big problem. What’s the problem? Dunno… Geeez I feel good. I’ve got no problems. John ·······  ·······Arnfinn
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 10,025 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting |
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The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner       |
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Arnfinn The Problem Is… Aug 7 09, 05:03 
ohsteve John, Problem? What problem... they say I used to... Aug 7 09, 20:10 Psyche Well put, Steve.
Ya gotta pay attention to frien... Aug 7 09, 23:17 Arnfinn Yeah, Sylv,
I know the reason why.
Well, it is ... Aug 8 09, 02:00 Arnfinn Mate, hope things are a bit better for ya.
Mate, ... Aug 8 09, 02:15 Arnfinn Read ya loud and clear, Christine.
John Aug 8 09, 02:17 ace John:
Makes an excellent visual poem and ther... Aug 10 09, 17:04 
Thoth Of all the things I've lost - - -
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