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The Lass in the Tam O'Shanter
The lass in the red tam o'shanter is lively with her bar room banter. She will tell a joke that makes tough lads choke. Village folk say she's a great enchanter. Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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Jul 24 09, 06:18
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Greek Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi John,
Thanks for reading and for your thoughts!! Yes, it should be "in." Fixed it. And I thought of one alternative to "strong." Do you like "tough" any better? ! Peggy ······· ······· |
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood The Lass in the Tam O'Shanter Jul 23 09, 09:53 
Arnfinn G'day Peg.
A chuckle.
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Limm... Jul 24 09, 04:59 Marc-Andre Germain Peggy, I think you should try a scansion of your o... Jul 24 09, 06:35 Arnfinn G'day Peg.
Yep! tough fits the bill.
Jo... Jul 24 09, 20:34 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Marc,
I appreciate your attempts to help me wi... Jul 24 09, 20:41 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John,
Glad you like "tough." Thanks... Jul 24 09, 20:43 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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