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 Jul 20 09, 05:32
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 Assyrian  Posts: 201 Joined: 28-April 09 From: Canada Member No.: 784 Real Name: Marc-Andre Germain Writer of: Poetry  |
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Jul 22 09, 16:13
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (Marc-Andre Germain @ Jul 20 09, 11:32 )  spring dance, robins twitter to the taps of clogs Hi Marc I quite like the content of this, but have to say that the one line threw me!!!! I haven't had chance to read your links, perhaps they will enlighten me. A couple of thoughts Perhaps another word for spring which just hints at the season? I'm not sure of the grammar here, but shouldn't it be robins twitter to the tap of clogs Lori has already clarified that there are no policies regarding this form (or any other) at MM. This forum was started by 2 haiku experts, and here is one of their links which might interest you. Also, if you want to learn more about haiku or any other forms take a look here at Karnak Crossing the Education Forums. Snow 
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Marc-Andre Germain an American haiku (spring dance...) Jul 20 09, 05:32 
Arnfinn G'day Mark.
spring dance, robins twitter to ... Jul 21 09, 02:32 Marc-Andre Germain John,
I begin to feel like I am here to critique ... Jul 21 09, 03:03 Arnfinn Well, Mark.
The policy for Haiku at MM is 5/7/5.
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Marc-Andre Germain QUOTE (Arnfinn @ Jul 21 09, 17:09 ) Well,... Jul 21 09, 06:20 prerna bala so you say that is a one line haiku ?
well this is... Jul 22 09, 05:34 Marc-Andre Germain QUOTE (prerna bala @ Jul 22 09, 17:34 ) -... Jul 22 09, 10:52 Cleo_Serapis Hi Mark,
There are no "policies" with r... Jul 22 09, 13:40 Marc-Andre Germain Cleo & Snow,
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