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 Jul 20 09, 05:35
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 Assyrian  Posts: 201 Joined: 28-April 09 From: Canada Member No.: 784 Real Name: Marc-Andre Germain Writer of: Poetry  |
arid summer -
the oak by the septic tank dips its roots ·······  ······· |
  
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Jul 21 09, 14:45
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 Greek Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in |
Hi Marc,
I'm sorry I offended you by critiquing a "joke" you were making. I assure you it didn't appear to be one. I am also sorry I offended you by not critiquing the "American Haiku" as well. Thank you for sincerely saying "Never mind." That's what we need in this world is more courtesy. As for the "American Haiku," I've never heard of such a haiku. What is an American haiku? I call what you wrote a "senryu." As for myself, I prefer a 5-7-5 senryu. Peggy ······· ······· |
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Marc-Andre Germain an American haiku (...the oak...) Jul 20 09, 05:35 
Arnfinn A good haiku; seasonal; present tense.
arid su... Jul 21 09, 02:47 Marc-Andre Germain John,
Thanks for responding. Where is good questi... Jul 21 09, 03:26 Arnfinn G'day, Mark.
I'm of the opinion that thi... Jul 21 09, 05:18 Marc-Andre Germain John,
Thanks for coming back. I'm glad to he... Jul 21 09, 06:37 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi marc,
Interesting "poodle/noodle" se... Jul 21 09, 08:59 
Marc-Andre Germain Thanks for the visit, Peggy. Nope, I am not advoca... Jul 21 09, 09:10 Marc-Andre Germain Peggy,
The American haiku...I've posted these... Jul 21 09, 20:52 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Marc,
I wouldn't be discouraged in mid-sum... Jul 21 09, 21:17 Marc-Andre Germain Peggy,
It's always summer here, but monsoon k... Jul 21 09, 21:53 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Marc,
Sounds like you live near Vancouver... Jul 21 09, 21:58 Marc-Andre Germain Hi Peggy,
I used to live in Vancouver, almost two... Jul 22 09, 03:33 prerna bala you have a season which is summer, and the Oak whi... Jul 22 09, 05:18 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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