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 Jul 9 09, 02:25
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 Babylonian  Posts: 66 Joined: 14-May 09 Member No.: 798 Real Name: James Carver Writer of: Poetry Referred By:poppy  |
a heavenly feast
aromatic decadence when daffodils smile |
  
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Jul 13 09, 04:23
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
G'day HF,
a heavenly feast aromatic decadence when daffodils smile I like the images created. Now look at this haiku: by Perdita Finn. a fingernail moon: all that is left in the sky after the blizzard Now, what has the poet created. 1st Identify the subject. Line one. 2nd define in a poetic way a central statement. Line 2. 3rd A final thought. Line 3. Keep the above in mind using a syllable count of 5/7/5 then write your Haiku. Not finnished yet. 1 write your Haiku. 2 Check the S/count (dictionary, Websters is a good choice). 3 Re-write and produce a poem that is a spiritual journey. Haiku is one of the traditional arts of Zen practice, one must not deviate from the spiritual essence of the poetry form. The poet should write Haiku as a type of thoughtful meditation. Rgards, John ·······  ·······Arnfinn
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hellfire HAIKU Jul 9 09, 02:25 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi HF,
Welcome to MM!!! It... Jul 9 09, 09:15 Marc-Andre Germain QUOTE (hellfire @ Jul 9 09, 14:25 ) What ... Jul 9 09, 10:44 hellfire hi peggy
thanks for welcoming me.
i have made som... Jul 9 09, 11:58 hellfire hi mark
thanks for the info.
i am learning as i g... Jul 9 09, 12:02 Marc-Andre Germain I have to disagree with John on two points here:
... Jul 16 09, 07:19 Arnfinn G'day Marc,
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